Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

People prefer newspapers and TV to get information rather than the Internet.

People prefer newspapers and TV to get information rather than the Internet. 6NWMl
It has been an enigmatic quandary as to what types of methods people prefer to use to achieve information about the world. However, having analyzed easy accessibility and selective obtainability, I state that the pubic is more likely to use the Internet to get global information. To begin with, easy accessibility lucidly demonstrates the matter pertaining to this theme. Much perfected by advanced computer technology, the Internet has become an in dispensable tool for almost everyone, whether it is children to grown-ups in the world. Through such a developed Internet, people can access a myriad of information with just a few clicks and anytime. This efficient access to information makes people use the Internet more frequently than ever before, both to find and exchange as much information as possible. Thus, this easy accessibility to the information unambiguously depicts the presence of the Internet rather than traditional means such as television and newspaper. Furthermore, selective obtainability clearly illustrates the issue at hand. The information floating through the Internet network is not only innumerable but also not confined to current issues of the world. However, the information on TV programs and newspapers, unfortunately though, mostly deals with the latest hotly-debated topics, not the one that people need to retrieve for their somewhat trivial everyday lives. In specific, the Internet provides the public with the electric service through which people can search and select whatever the information they need. All information can be selectively browsed, regardless of when it happened and how much it was important. This selective obtainability indubitably indicates why people more use the Internet rather than any other means to collect the information. At first glance, it may seem like many people still largely depend on TV and newspapers to get the information, but the examples of easy accessibility and selective obtainability coherently demonstrate why people prefer to use the Internet than newspapers and TV programs.
It has been an enigmatic quandary as to what types of methods
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
prefer to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
to achieve
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
about the world.
However
, having analyzed
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
easy
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
accessibility
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
selective
Possible spelling mistake found.
obtainability
, I state that the
Did you mean "public"?
pubic
is more likely to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
the Internet to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
global information.

To
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
begin
with,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
easy
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
accessibility
lucidly
demonstrates the matter pertaining to this theme. Much perfected by advanced computer technology, the Internet has become an in dispensable tool for almost everyone, whether it is children to grown-ups in the world. Through such a developed Internet,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
can access a myriad of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
with
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
a few clicks and anytime. This efficient access to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
the Internet more
frequently
than ever
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
, both to find and exchange as much
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
as possible.
Thus
, this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
easy
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
accessibility
to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
unambiguously
depicts the presence of the Internet
rather
than traditional means such as television and newspaper.

Furthermore
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
selective
Possible spelling mistake found.
obtainability
clearly
illustrates the issue at hand. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
floating through the Internet network is not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
innumerable
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
also
not confined to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
issues of the world.
However
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
on TV programs and newspapers, unfortunately though,
mostly
deals with the latest
hotly
-debated topics, not the one that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
need to retrieve for their somewhat trivial everyday
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
lives
. In specific, the Internet provides the public with the electric service through which
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
can search and select whatever the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
they need. All
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
can be
selectively
browsed, regardless of when it happened and how much it was
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
. This
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
selective
Possible spelling mistake found.
obtainability
indubitably
indicates why
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
more
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
the Internet
rather
than any other means to collect the information.

At
first
glance, it may seem like
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
still
largely
depend on TV and newspapers to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
the examples of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
easy
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
accessibility
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
selective
Possible spelling mistake found.
obtainability
coherently
demonstrate why
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
prefer to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
the Internet than newspapers and TV programs.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay People prefer newspapers and TV to get information rather than the Internet.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
316 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • People prefer newspapers and TV to get information rather than the Internet.