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People prefer modern gudzets rather than physically due to advancement of technology

People prefer modern gudzets rather than physically due to advancement of technology YyK8n
In this day and age ample of individuals are foundness to get together linked as prospectively to modern gadzets equipment in nowadays as well as rather than the physically due to advancement of technology. As far as I am concerned with negative trend of socialize online rather than togethering of human being. Apparently some masses are well brain techniques how to blackmail the folks with their unusual activities to exemplify hackers are the expert for hacking the personal details and information related with business, financial so on which harm the personal verification starts blackmailing as making arthical site on various websites as a repurcussion foundness of money as well as physical harassment. Every coin has two sides as there are some pros however comes with relevant views. Lets us take a look at positive trend respectively as individuals suffer from hectic schedule as consume their time management. Human being are partially to taste of communicate online rather than physically. Masses often their plans or other information discuss on the social website straightforwardly Agglomerations all the views it can be considered that folks have foundness of socialize online which create a slightly misleading as partially far away from physical togetherness.
In this day and age ample of individuals are
foundness
to
get
together linked as
prospectively
to modern
gadzets
equipment
in nowadays
as well
as
rather
than
the
physically
due to advancement of technology.
As
far as I
am concerned
with
negative
trend of socialize online
rather
than
togethering
of human being.
Apparently
some
masses are well brain techniques how to blackmail the folks with their unusual activities to exemplify hackers are the expert for hacking the personal
details
and information related with business, financial
so
on which harm the personal verification
starts
blackmailing as making
arthical
site on various websites as a
repurcussion
foundness
of money
as well
as physical harassment. Every coin has two sides as there are
some
pros
however
comes
with relevant views.
Lets
us take a look at
positive
trend
respectively
as individuals suffer from hectic schedule as consume their time management. Human being are
partially
to taste of communicate online
rather
than
physically
. Masses
often
their plans or other information discuss on the social website
straightforwardly
Agglomerations all the views it can
be considered
that folks have
foundness
of socialize online which create a
slightly
misleading as
partially
far away from physical togetherness.
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IELTS essay People prefer modern gudzets rather than physically due to advancement of technology

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  American English
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199 words
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