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People prefer buying a own house instead of rental home. Did you agree or disagree?

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All over the world, almost every creature need shelter to live and do the things as they want without any disturbance. Likewise, human beings also in need to have a house to enjoy their time with family and friends. We have an option to rent and own a home. Being a tenant in the rental house is cost effective in most of the cases such as house tax, water tax and some more. Because it is not necessary to pay for such things as we are not owning the home. On the other hand, We need to pay a considerable amount in certain scenarios like electricity bill and maintenance cost which is more than normal rate based on the owner’s agreement. Also, We have a lot more restrictions while making some changes in the interior parts as per our convenience. Some people will allow the alterations. But most of the cases, they don’t. Even we can not partying with friends and could not enjoy as per our likings. Finally, Some owners never allow pets in their apartments. However, We do not bother about anything if you have a own home. As per our wish, We can live our life without any disturbance. Same way, We can enjoy each and every thing in our home without any restrictions. We can paint the walls as per our taste. That will enhance our mood without knowing to us. Some colorful paintings brings joy and we can enjoy and celebrate the festivals without any issues. Before buying a own house, we should consider some of the important things which we need to sacrifice some amount of money for our happiness and related to the taxes which should be paid to the government. Every year, We have to save money for the home maintenance as well. Spending money in our own house will not be an issue for people. In my aspect, owning a house is a positive situation where everbody has the desire to get the property even if it is small or luxurious. To achieve that, it needs a lot of hardwork and perseverance. Obviously we should encourage their definite goals. Also, they have to pay taxes which increases the government revenue to maintain the cities in proper manner. Perhaps, that is a positive note from the country development perspective.
All over the world, almost every creature
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need
shelter to
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live
and do the things as they want without any disturbance.
Likewise
, human beings
also
in
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need
to have a
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house
to
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enjoy
their time with family and friends.

We have an option to rent and
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own
a home. Being a tenant in the rental
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house
is cost
effective in most of the cases such as
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house
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tax
, water
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tax
and
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some
more.
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Because
it is not necessary to pay for such things as we
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are not owning
the home.
On the other hand
, We
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need
to pay a considerable amount in certain scenarios like electricity bill and maintenance cost which is more than normal rate based on the owner’s agreement.
Also
, We have a lot more restrictions while making
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some
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changes
in the interior parts as per our convenience.
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Some
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people
will
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allow
the alterations.
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But
most of the cases, they don’t. Even we can not
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partying
with friends and could not
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enjoy
as per our
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likings
.
Finally
,
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Some
owners never
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allow
pets in their apartments.

However
, We do not bother about anything if you have
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a
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own
home. As per our wish, We can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
our life without any disturbance. Same way, We can
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enjoy
each and every thing in our home without any restrictions. We can paint the walls as per our taste. That will enhance our mood without knowing to us.
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Some
colorful paintings
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brings
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joy and
we can
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enjoy
and celebrate the festivals without any issues.
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Before
buying
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a
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own
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house
, we should consider
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some of the
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important
things which we
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need
to sacrifice
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some
amount of money for our happiness and related to the
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taxes
which should
be paid
to the
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government
. Every year, We
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have to
save money for the home maintenance
as well
. Spending money in our
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own
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house
will not be an issue for
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people
.

In my aspect, owning a
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house
is a
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positive
situation where
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everbody
has the desire to
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get
the property even if it is
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small
or luxurious. To achieve that, it
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needs
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a lot of
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hardwork
and perseverance.
Obviously
we should encourage their
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definite
goals.
Also
, they
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have to
pay
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taxes
which increases the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
revenue to maintain the cities in proper manner. Perhaps,
that is
a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
note from the country development perspective.
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IELTS essay People prefer buying a own house instead of rental home. Did you agree or disagree?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
387 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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