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My favourite web sit in internet

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The internet now is very wide spread in all the world. There are many people from all kinds of ages surf the internet. So, the internet has many of websites my favourite one is Ted. TED Conferences LLC (Technology, Entertainment, Design) is an American media organization that posts talks online for free distribution under the slogan "ideas worth spreading". It is founded has been in 1984 since 37 years. It is available in English and allows multilingual subtitles, transcript. TED events are also happen throughout North America and in Europe, Asia, and Africa, offering of live of the talks. Between 2001 and 2006, TED upgraded its platform to have TED talks online for free, added TEDGlobal that became a worldwide conference, and created the TED prize. I found it since 2018. I usually visit this website twice a weeks. I like it because talks about video/tutorials from over the world. The purpose of website is to talk about motivational lectures, ideas that which worth spreading. Also, it is include of health, technology, science, religion, human rights. it is has a lot of different topics. about all sides of life. Finally, the talks give by different people from all over the world. Also, we can enjoy the talk and learn English at same time.
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multilingual subtitles, transcript.

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about motivational lectures,
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IELTS essay My favourite web sit in internet

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
213 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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