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people nowdays prefer to build houses outside the city.what are the reasons of it.is is positive or negative development.

people nowdays prefer to build houses outside the city. what are the reasons of it. is is positive or negative development. 0lQVn
It is irrefutable that nowdays most people alter their dwelling place according to need. It is quoted by few individuals that remote area is mostly preferable by masses to constructive houses. I reckon it is a positive development due to congested area and commercialisation The major reason of shifting of people fron the city to open area is problem of congestion because the houses are very small in the city as well as amount of population is also higher so they face many obstacles by living in such type of areas. It is hardly for them to survive in congested place. To epitome-Majority of peoples in city area face disease due to congested and large proportion. Furthemore, commercialisation is also another cause of altering the place because people want to establish their business and for future goals they have to move. Thus, mostly individuals change their living place. From my perspective, I consider it is a positive development due to healthier environ meny because people in the city area have to face the contaminants problems because use of more vehicles as well as industries but in the remote area they find pollution free environment that is free from ailments. Moreover, remote area also provide fresh air as for keeping the bodu healthy and beneficial for breathing. For instance-Healthier environment provide energy and freshness due to more plantation. Hence, it proves beneficial to reside in open area. To recapitulate, residing changed by most people nowdays however city also provide many amenties but there are many drawbacks that cannot be neglected.
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nowdays
most
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people
alter their dwelling place according to need. It
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by few individuals that remote
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area
is
mostly
preferable by masses to constructive
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houses
. I reckon it is a
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positive
development
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due
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area
and
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commercialisation


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people
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fron
the city to open
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area
is problem of congestion
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houses
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small
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they face
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obstacles by living in such type of
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areas
. It is hardly for them to survive in congested place. To epitome-Majority of
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peoples
in city
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area
face disease
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due
to congested and large proportion.
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,
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commercialisation
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also
another cause of altering the place
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because
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people
want to establish their business and for future goals they
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have to
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move
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their living place.

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positive
development
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due
to healthier environ
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meny
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because
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people
in the city
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area
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have to
face the contaminants problems
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because
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use
of more vehicles
as well
as industries
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but
in the remote
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area
they find pollution free environment
that is
free from ailments.
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, remote
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area
also
provide fresh air as for keeping the
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bodu
healthy and beneficial for breathing.
For instance
-Healthier environment provide energy and freshness
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due
to more plantation.
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, it proves beneficial to reside in open
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area
. To recapitulate, residing
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changed
by most
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people
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nowdays
however
city
also
provide
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many
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amenties
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there are
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drawbacks that cannot
be neglected
.

IELTS essay people nowdays prefer to build houses outside the city. what are the reasons of it. is is positive or negative development.

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