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cohabitation is a boon or bane?

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Living together before legally marrying one another is thought to be heavily beneficial to the current generation as it allows them to know each other completely and understand what they are signing up for. Marraige is often an institution built on trust, love and compromise. However, a trial period before entering into this process can do more right than wrong, given the mental state and worries of the younger sector of people now-a-days. Although, not everyone might be on board with this, as human beings have arised due to a process of evolution and some people might still lag behind with these progressive ideas and often choose age old traditions. They might not be comfortable and feel going by the book or playing by the rules is the best way for everyone around. In my opinion, I agree with living together being the best option as with these changing times, people should adapt themselves to be flexible enough to accept such revolutionary ideas because at the end of the day love is all that matters and stays till we perish. Firstly, cohabitations has come into existence recently and they can prove to have a plethora of benefits as managing a house is not an easy task and that is when people actually realise, affection is not the only thing that makes the foundation of marraige stronger and that there is a lot more to it. For instance, work division between tasks that are innumerous when it comes to sharing a place, time management, compromising on certain things, being honest with each other and the list will go on. Although, all of these things might seem easier to do, we only know the depth of waters once we enter it. Sharing the same space can be a one stop solution for all of these issues. Human beings all complicated and everyone has their own way of living, love might sound like a piece of cake but is it really? Young people can find the answer only by living together and acclimitizing themselves to such situations. Cohabitation has been a recent development amongst human race and is starting to get legalised in quite a few countries. Studies have also proven that couples that have tremoundous amount of patience and honesty have been successful in this venture and also had a happy ending with marraige. In my personal experience, I have a few friends in my hometown who have tried and tested this process, few ended up seperating whereas few said that they found their soulmates in each other by the end. So, it can actually be called ablessing in disguise. All in all, marriage if simply put, is just a contract between two people and nothing more, the real deal will be whether or not they will be ready to put up with each other when problems of humoungous size arise. I can go as far to say that, cohabitation is a blessing in disguise and when given a choice, people should opt for it.
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generation as it
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them to know each
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completely and understand what they are signing up for.

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an institution built on trust,
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love
and compromise.
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, a trial period
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before
entering into this process can do more right than
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,
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given
the mental state and worries of the younger sector of
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now
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be on board with this, as human beings have
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due to a process of evolution and
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still
lag behind with these progressive
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and
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choose age
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traditions. They
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not be comfortable and feel going by the book or playing by the
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is the best way for everyone around.

In my opinion, I
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with
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together being the best option as with these changing times,
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should adapt themselves to be flexible
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enough
to accept such revolutionary
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ideas
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at the
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of the day
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is all that matters and stays till we perish.

Firstly
,
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recently and
they can prove to have a plethora of benefits as managing a
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house
is not an easy task and
that is
when
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actually
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realise
, affection is not the
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only
thing that
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makes
the foundation of
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stronger and that there is a lot more to it.
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, work division between tasks that are
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when it
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to sharing a place, time management, compromising on certain things, being honest with each
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and the list will go on.

Although, all of these things
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seem easier to do, we
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only
know the depth of waters once we enter it. Sharing the same space can be a one
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solution for all of these issues. Human beings all complicated and everyone has their
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own
way of
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,
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sound like a piece of cake
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is it
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? Young
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can find the answer
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by
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together and
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acclimitizing
themselves to such situations.

Cohabitation has been a recent development amongst human race and is starting to
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get
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legalised
in quite a few countries. Studies have
also
proven that couples that have
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tremoundous
amount of patience and honesty have been successful in this venture and
also
had a happy ending with
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marraige
. In my personal experience, I have a few friends in my hometown who have tried and
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tested
this process, few ended up
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seperating
whereas few said that they found their soulmates in each
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by the
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end
.
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, it can actually
be called
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ablessing
in disguise.

All in all, marriage if
simply
put, is
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just
a contract between two
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people
and nothing more, the real deal will be
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whether or not
they will be ready to put up with each
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other
when problems of
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humoungous
size arise. I can go as far to say that, cohabitation is a blessing in disguise and when
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given
a choice,
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people
should opt for it.
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IELTS essay cohabitation is a boon or bane?

Essay
  American English
8 paragraphs
503 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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