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as communication technology develops people are Interacting with each other in different ways discuss the merits and demerits of using communication technology

as communication technology develops people are Interacting with each other in different ways discuss the merits and demerits of using communication technology d9xJ2
Due to advancement of era, technology is increasing day by day, therefore, individuals are using digital platform instead of meeting face to face. There are numerous benefits as well as limitations for the utilization of communication technology which are critiqued in subsequent paragraphs. Commencing with the merits of communication technology to interacting with each others, as everyone knows time is the money, people can easily share their ideas, opinions, thoughts with anyone without wasting their precious time by usage of mobiles telephones, emails etcetera even pupil have no need to travel for long distance whether they are staying any corner of the world, they can easily communicate by one click only. For example, a survey conducted by Howard University in 2018 that revealed 68% of Chinese companies are dealing on the behalf of emails only. Apart from this, Communication technology helpful to make strong relationships on international platforms in order to boost up the economy of any country. However, as every coin has two sides, it has dark side too. Primarily, communication technology not only affect the relationships between people but also the chances of misunderstanding enhance which creates the conflict between them, hence, The relationship between friends and relatives suffer. For example, recently, a survey conducted by a well known news channel revealed that 20% relationships broke up due to massive use of communications technology as compared to face to face interactions. Nevertheless, Digital platform impact on the communication skills as well, which decrease the level of confidence of any person, hence, people become introvert. To encapsulate, it is true that communication technology brings a considerable change according to the advancement of era but the drawbacks which are associated with it cannot be neglected.
Due to advancement of era,
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technology
is increasing day by day,
therefore
, individuals are using digital

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platform
instead
of meeting
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face
to
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face
. There are numerous benefits
as well
as limitations for
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the


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utilization
of
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communication
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technology
which
are critiqued
in subsequent paragraphs.

Commencing with the merits of
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communication
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technology
to interacting with each
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others
, as everyone

knows time is the money,
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people
can
easily
share their
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ideas
, opinions, thoughts with anyone without

wasting their precious time by usage of mobiles telephones, emails etcetera even pupil have no need to

travel for long distance whether they are staying any corner of the world, they can
easily
communicate

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by
one click
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only
.
For example
, a survey conducted by Howard University in 2018 that revealed 68%
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of


Chinese
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companies
are dealing on the behalf of emails
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only
. Apart from this,
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Communication


technology helpful to
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make
strong relationships on international platforms in order to boost up the

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economy
of any country.

However
, as every coin has two sides, it has dark side too.
Primarily
,
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communication
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technology
not
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only


affect the relationships between
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people
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but
also
the chances of misunderstanding enhance which

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creates
the conflict between them,
hence
, The relationship between friends and relatives suffer. For

example, recently, a survey conducted by a well known news channel revealed that 20% relationships

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broke
up due to massive
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use
of communications
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technology
as compared to
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face
to
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face
interactions.
Nevertheless
, Digital platform impact on the
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communication
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skills
as well
, which decrease the level of

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confidence
of any person,
hence
,
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people
become introvert.

To encapsulate, it is true that
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communication
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technology
brings a considerable
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change
according to the

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advancement
of era
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but
the drawbacks which
are associated
with it cannot
be neglected
.
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IELTS essay as communication technology develops people are Interacting with each other in different ways discuss the merits and demerits of using communication technology

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  American English
19 paragraphs
285 words
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