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People nowadays are spending more time in workplace and it is argued that this is a problem for family life do you agree or disagree

People nowadays are spending more time in workplace and it is argued that this is a problem for family life wmPKd

It is often argued that that, in this contemporary world mankind ae permitted to their respective professional places with out sparing their time with personal life. I completely agree with this opinion. First of all, i believe that spending more time in workplace Will reduce the connection between the family member's. Even if they are good at profession they fail to maintain network among the family. for instance, a lot of people will work round a clock in their office, they even don't have time to have supper with their family member's this may cause less communication among the family.

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often
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, in this contemporary world mankind Possible spelling mistake found.eyeAEaasatan
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 permitted to their respective professional places This word is usually written together. Did you mean "without"?without
with out
 sparing their time with personal life. I completely This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 with this opinion. This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 believe that spending more time in workplace Will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduce
 the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :correlation between
connection between
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclantribegrouppeoplehousehousehold
family
 member's. “Even if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Even if
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good
 at profession they fail to maintain network among the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclantribegrouppeoplehousehousehold
family
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterFor
for
 instance, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 will work round a clock in their office, they even don't have time to have supper with their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclantribegrouppeoplehousehousehold
family
 member's this may cause less communication among the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclantribegrouppeoplehousehousehold
family
. 