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As can be seen, university education ensures graduates better job opportunities, however, some argue that university has a much wider positive influence over people and society.

As can be seen, university education ensures graduates better job opportunities, however, some argue that university has a much wider positive influence over people and society. PX7Eg
University education plays such an vital role in one development. As can be seen, university education ensures graduates better job opportunities, however, some argue that university has a much wider positive influence over people and society. This essay will discuss both of these points and argue in favour of the latter. On the one hand, there is no doubt that university graduates stand a higher chance of getting fine job offers. University education can guarantee the students qualifications as the educational courses provided by universites are mostly from authentic sources and teached by professors who have a large profession knowledge
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education ensures graduates better job opportunities,
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argue that
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has a much wider
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influence over
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people
and society. This essay will discuss both of these points and argue in
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of the latter. On the one hand, there is no doubt that
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university
graduates stand a higher chance of getting fine job offers.
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University
education can guarantee the students qualifications as the educational courses provided by
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universites
are
mostly
from authentic sources and
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teached
by professors who have a large profession
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knowledge
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IELTS essay As can be seen, university education ensures graduates better job opportunities, however, some argue that university has a much wider positive influence over people and society.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
99 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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