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Coronavirus disease is a deadly virus around the world

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Coronaviruses are a family of viruses that can cause respiratory illness in humans. They are called “corona” because of crown-like spikes on the surface of the virus. Severe acute respiratory syndrome (SARS), Middle East respiratory syndrome (MERS) and the common cold are examples of coronaviruses that cause illness in humans. The new strain of coronavirus — COVID-19 — was first reported in Wuhan, China in December 2019. The virus has since spread to all continents. The number of people infected changes daily. As of this writing (10/11/2021), more than 196, 910, 000 people in the world have been infected. Over 4, 850, 000 people have died. Some 192 countries and territories on all continents have now reported cases of COVID-19. COVID-19 enters your body through your mouth, nose or eyes (directly from the airborne droplets or from transfer of the virus from your hands to your face). The virus travels to the back of your nasal passages and mucous membrane in the back of your throat. It attaches to cells there, begins to multiply and moves into lung tissue. From there, the virus can spread to other body tissues.
Coronaviruses are a family of viruses that can cause respiratory illness in humans. They
are called
“corona”
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because
of crown-like spikes on the surface of the
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virus
. Severe acute respiratory syndrome (SARS), Middle East respiratory syndrome (MERS) and the common
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cold
are examples of coronaviruses that cause illness in humans.

The new strain of coronavirus — COVID-19 — was
first
reported in Wuhan, China in December 2019. The
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virus
has since spread to all continents.
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The
number of
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people
infected
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changes
daily. As of this writing (10/11/2021), more than 196, 910, 000
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people
in the world have
been infected
. Over 4, 850, 000
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people
have
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died
.
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Some
192 countries and territories on all continents have
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now
reported cases of COVID-19. COVID-19 enters your body through your mouth, nose or eyes (
directly
from the airborne droplets or from transfer of the
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virus
from your hands to your face). The
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virus
travels to the back of your nasal passages and mucous membrane in the back of your throat. It attaches to cells there,
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begins
to multiply and
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moves
into lung tissue. From there, the
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virus
can spread to other body tissues.
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IELTS essay Coronavirus disease is a deadly virus around the world

Essay
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189 words
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