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People nowadays are more likely to own houses instead of renting them

People nowadays are more likely to own houses instead of renting them 6L0yW

People nowadays are more likely to own houses instead of renting them. It is a controversial idea associated with nations in many countries. From my perspective, being the owner will provide lots of positive circumstances. The causes and benefits will be outlined in the following paragraphs. First and foremost, these days, social values have become one of the most concerned factors, which is impact people’s mindset. Owning a personal house is included in order to present their income and well-being lifestyle. For example, in Thailand, people are encouraged to purchase a house after entering a full-time job by the reason that they have the potential to pay the monthly bills. Moreover, this ideal sometimes applies to a particular gender, women are more interested in mature men, who have their private accommodation because it means he can treat his girlfriend well. However, having a house can give lots of benefits. Apparently, lands’ value always increases annually, which means although purchasing a house might come with a huge cost, people can sell it at a higher price. Furthermore, having privacy space, where people can decorate and build everything that they desire, which might be restricted if they live in other’s places. For example, when I was living in a dormitory, the landlord did not allow their tenants to paint the wallpaper or do anything with the interior. To summarize, although having a private house is more peaceful and relax, it comes with high maintenance costs. People who do not have a stable income should avoid participating in this massive debt.

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own
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houses
instead
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idea
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positive
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First
 and foremost, these days, social values have become one of the most concerned factors, which is impact You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people’s
 mindset. Owning a personal You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
is included
 in order to present their income and well-being lifestyle. For example
, in Thailand, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
are encouraged
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purchase
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house
 after entering a full-time job by the reason that they have the potential to pay the monthly bills. Moreover
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men
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because
 it means he can treat his girlfriend well.

However
, having a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
 can give lots of benefits. Apparently
, lands’ value always increases annually
, which means although purchasing a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
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come
 with a huge cost, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 can sell it at a higher price. Furthermore
, having privacy space, where You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 can decorate and build everything that they desire, which might be restricted
 if they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 in other’s places. For example
, when I was living in a dormitory, the landlord did not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
allow
 their tenants to paint the wallpaper or do anything with the interior.

To summarize
, although having a private You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
 is more peaceful and relax, it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approachesarrives
comes
 with high maintenance costs. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
People
 who do not have a stable income should avoid participating in this massive debt. 