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Some people think that physical strength is important and other think that mental strength is important discuss both view

Some people think that physical strength is important and other think that mental strength is important discuss both view gbrM7
In this era cut throat compition in every field. Moreover, physical and mental strength play a pivotal role for every players due to achieve goal. Moreover, some people think that physical strength is important. However, others argued that mental strength is a crucial. In this essay I will discuss both view. Furthermore, both skill is essential. Even if, unfortunately happen at that time players can handle with it accordingly with physical and mental health. Firstly, I opine that both ability is equally important for athelete. Furthermore, it is crystal clear that only Physical strength is indispensable fact for athelete. After that, physical features could not be enough and as always. However, players feel not better as weight gain or any unfortunately any road accident cause at that point mental health is necessary to achieve aim in sports. For instance, one kabbadi player has road accident fortunately not deadly but he did lot excerise its body repaired and he is achieved his goal in his match. If, he has high motivation to do physical exercise regularly then they could obtain their strong body. In contrast, player feel depression at that time physical ability through back. Even though, they mental motivation could be superhero at that time. To summarise that, it is arguably both strength is vital role for players. Subsequently, if sustainable physical power and mental health he or she player's can do any thing in sports.
In this era
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cut throat
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compition
in every field.
Moreover
,
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physical
and
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mental
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strength
play a pivotal role for every
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players
due to achieve goal.
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Moreover
,
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some
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people
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think
that
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physical
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strength
is
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important
.
However
, others argued that
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mental
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strength
is
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a crucial
. In this essay I will discuss both view.
Furthermore
, both
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skill
is essential. Even if, unfortunately happen at that time
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players
can handle with it
accordingly
with
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physical
and
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mental
health.

Firstly
, I opine that both ability is
equally
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important
for
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athelete
.
Furthermore
, it is crystal
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clear
that
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only
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Physical
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strength
is indispensable fact for
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athelete
. After that,
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physical
features could not be
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enough
and as always.
However
,
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players
feel not better as weight gain or any unfortunately any road accident cause at that point
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mental
health is necessary to achieve aim in sports.
For instance
, one
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kabbadi
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player
has road accident
fortunately
not deadly
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but
he did lot
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excerise
its body
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repaired and
he
is achieved
his goal in his match.

If, he has high motivation to do
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physical
exercise
regularly
then they could obtain their strong body.
In contrast
,
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player
feel depression at that time
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physical
ability through back.
Even though
, they
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mental
motivation could be superhero at that time.

To
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summarise
that, it is
arguably
both
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strength
is vital role for
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players
.
Subsequently
, if sustainable
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physical
power and
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mental
health he or
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she player
's can do
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any thing
in sports.
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IELTS essay Some people think that physical strength is important and other think that mental strength is important discuss both view

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
236 words
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