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People not safe home or out problem solutions

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Insecure has been becoming a grave matter of concern, in yester year, which is burgeoning at an alarming rate. Two primary causative factors such as crime rate and deteriorating environment can be attributed this phenomenon; however, bureaucrats can play a vital role to fix it exponentially. One of the most obvious culprit is that unemployment rate, and discrimination between rich and poor has been increasing monumentally. To be more precise, due to inclination plenty of companies and factories also closed. .
Insecure has been becoming a grave matter of concern, in
yester
year, which is burgeoning at an alarming rate. Two primary causative factors such as crime rate and deteriorating environment can
be attributed
this phenomenon;
however
, bureaucrats can play a vital role to
fix
it
exponentially
.

One of the most obvious
culprit
is that unemployment rate, and discrimination between rich and poor has been increasing
monumentally
. To be more precise, due to inclination
plenty
of
companies
and factories
also
closed.
.
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IELTS essay People not safe home or out problem solutions

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
81 words
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