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people need to know what they need

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i would say according to the modern technology it is to risky to share scientific research to the World as it effect the common life style. some people believe that sharing information can enhance human brain but also enhance to go in a wrong path as we know in this modern world they are so many leaked information across the World Wild Web which lead's to million of rupees dept to other country's. As we know in 2019 the world was hit with a pandemic and scientist, doctor's spend there life finding the cure, To find the cure they are going to test on Animals with leads to Collateral damage with is not meant to share to the World and kept secret TO sum up i would say that sharing information to the society at some instance is good and hiding research and secret information need to be hide form the World for better or the Worst
i
would say according to the modern technology it is
to risky to
share scientific research to the
World
as it effect the common life style.

some
people
believe that sharing
information
can enhance human brain
but
also
enhance to go in a
wrong
path as we know in this modern
world
they are
so
many
leaked
information
across the
World
Wild Web which lead's to
million
of rupees dept to other country's.

As we know in 2019 the
world
was hit
with a pandemic and scientist,
doctor's
spend there life finding the cure, To find the cure they are going to
test
on Animals with leads to Collateral damage with is not meant to share to the
World
and
kept
secret

TO sum up
i
would say that sharing
information
to the society at
some
instance is
good
and hiding research and secret
information
need to be
hide
form the
World
for better or the Worst
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IELTS essay people need to know what they need

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
156 words
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