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Describe an art exhibition that you have visited

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Well, I do not have very good painting skills but I have a soft corner for paintings and other arts. Therefore, I visit many museums and art exhibitions in my nation. Currently, I am talking about one art exhibition that I watch last year. My cousin's brother have very good painting skills and he showcases their paintings in many art exhibitions. Most of the time he invited me to their exhibition. Last year also he invited me to one art exhibition which is in downtown of our city and the building name is the Gandhi Smriti Bhavan. It is a huge hall and most of the part of the hall is covered by the exhibition. Painters came from all over India and showcase their talent. Around 400 painters took participate in this exhibition and they displayed 2000 paintings. The topic of painting was climate change. All paintings were classic and very good but some of the paintings I didn't understand. My brother helps me to understand this type of paintings, he told me that it is a different type of art such as abstract or cubism. So, I couldn't understand this. All in all, it gives me a memorable experience and one thought that everyone has to do some work and time for maintaining our planet.
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museums and
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exhibitions in my nation.

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exhibition that I
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last year
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My cousin's brother have
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skills and
he showcases their
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paintings
in
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exhibitions.

Most of the time he invited me to their exhibition.

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also
he invited me to one
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art
exhibition which is in downtown of our city and the building name is the Gandhi
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Smriti
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Bhavan
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It is a huge hall and most of the part of the hall
is covered
by the exhibition. Painters came from all over India and showcase their talent.

Around 400 painters took participate in this
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exhibition and
they displayed 2000 paintings.

The topic of
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was climate
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change
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All
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were classic and
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some of the
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I didn't understand.

My brother
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, he
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type of
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such as abstract or cubism.

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So
, I couldn't understand this.

All in all, it gives me a memorable experience and one
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that everyone
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work and time for maintaining our planet.

IELTS essay Describe an art exhibition that you have visited

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12 paragraphs
216 words
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