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People living lazy life is tending nowaday. What are problems and solutions for the same.

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In today's world, everyone is living a sedentary lifestyle in spite of a huge number of gyms. This can lead to many issues and it also has remedies. This essay delves with problems and solutions and reaches an amicable conclusion with relevant examples. To begin with, lazy living can lead to a lack of muscular and heart exercises which can cause many diseases. To illustrate, a scientific study has proven that individuals who have an idle lifestyle tend to die at an age of 40 to 50 years due to heart diseases. Secondly, the level of energy to work for routine may fall and may hinder mental and physical development. Lastly, if sudden physical exertion is done by denizens then they may feel exhausted.
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has remedies. This essay delves with problems and solutions and reaches an amicable conclusion with relevant examples.

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with, lazy living can lead to a lack of muscular and heart exercises which can cause
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many
diseases. To illustrate, a scientific study has proven that individuals who have an idle lifestyle tend to
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die
at an age of 40 to 50 years due to heart diseases.
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, the level of energy to work for routine may fall and may hinder mental and physical development.
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, if sudden physical exertion
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by denizens then they may feel exhausted.
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IELTS essay People living lazy life is tending nowaday. What are problems and solutions for the same.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
124 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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