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The most of visitor coming to the US steel came from Canada despite a decline in 1990 and 1992. The percentage of Chinese visitors has increased significantly and the figure for Mexico changed slightly The most of visitor coming to the US steel came from Canada despite a decline in 1990 and 1992. The percentage of Chinese visitors has increased significantly and the figure for Mexico changed slightly The most of visitor coming to the US steel came from Canada despite a decline in 1990 and 1992. The percentage of Chinese visitors has increased significantly and the figure for Mexico changed slightly
The most of
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visitor
coming to the US steel came from Canada despite a decline in 1990 and 1992. The percentage of Chinese
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
visitors
has increased
significantly
and the figure for Mexico
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changed
slightly
The most of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
visitor
coming to the US steel came from Canada despite a decline in 1990 and 1992.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
percentage of Chinese
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
visitors
has increased
significantly
and the figure for Mexico
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changed
slightly
The most of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
visitor
coming to the US steel came from Canada despite a decline in 1990 and 1992.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
percentage of Chinese
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
visitors
has increased
significantly
and the figure for Mexico
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changed
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IELTS essay The percentage of people

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
101 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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