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Some people believe that a country will benefit greatly if its students study abroad.

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Some individuals say that sending students to study abroad is the key to develop the country. From my perspective, while studying abroad brings many benefits, I still believe that it have its own restrictions. One the one hand, studying aboard have some positive sides. First and foremost, the education of several oversea countries are very develop. In other words, their knowledge is very updated. Learners, who study abroad can archieve that knowledge and apply it to build up their motherland.

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