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people living in the 21st century generally have a better quality of life than the previous centuries. Do you agree or disagree. v.1

people living in the 21st century generally have a better quality of life than the previous centuries. v. 1
In the contemporary era, there is a heated argument over the issue that, masses living in the modern times have a Best standard of living instead of Yesterdays. A lion's share of society in its favour. The following paragraphs would shed light on my personal perspective views a long wide an Opt example. To commence with the various reasons, First and foremost, days are gone when individuals usually commute by bull carts, horse back in eighteen time period but, at the present with the help of technology new inventions have taken place. For instance, cities like New Delhi now people commute by Metro's, railways and city buses. Secondly, in the past decade specially blooming buds study under a tree without classes and Electricity but, nowadays children study under a roof with the assistance of smart classes. Probing further, as comparing the old days there has a lack of job facilities where as, now the multinational companies give better opportunities to Highly educated person. Moving ahead, nowadays the infrastructure of many Countries is improving well. The country of India and China is on top because of the better development of Schooling system. Last but not the least, the human work effort is vanishing out due to new technological items. As an example, in the old times the ten employees done paperwork by consuming more time. While, in early days There is a printer which can be done better work Then, labour by taking less time. Hammering the last nail, I am of the Opine that people feel in of late that life becomes so comfortable due to better health services education and human resources.
In the contemporary era, there is a heated argument over the issue that, masses living in the modern
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times
have a Best standard of living
instead
of Yesterdays. A lion's share of society in its
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favour
. The following paragraphs would shed light on my personal perspective views a long wide
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an Opt
example.

To commence with the various reasons,
First
and foremost, days
are gone
when individuals
usually
commute by bull carts, horse back in eighteen
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time
period
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but
, at the present with the
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help
of technology new inventions have taken place.
For instance
, cities like New Delhi
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now
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
commute by Metro's, railways and city buses.
Secondly
, in the past decade
specially
blooming buds study under a tree without classes and Electricity
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but
, nowadays children study under a roof with the assistance of smart classes.

Probing
further
, as comparing the
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old
days there has a lack of job facilities
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where as
,
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now
the multinational
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companies
give
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better
opportunities to
Highly
educated person. Moving ahead, nowadays the infrastructure of
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many
Countries is improving well. The country of India and China is on top
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because
of the
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better
development of Schooling system. Last
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but
not the least, the human work effort is vanishing out due to new technological items. As an example, in the
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old
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times
the ten employees done paperwork by consuming more
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time
. While, in early days There is a printer which can
be done
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better
work Then,
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labour
by taking less time.

Hammering the last nail, I am of
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the Opine
that
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people
feel in of late that life becomes
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so
comfortable due to
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better
health services education and human resources.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes
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IELTS essay people living in the 21st century generally have a better quality of life than the previous centuries. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
273 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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