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People know less about their neighbours. What are reasons and sollutions

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The significant rises of the population, fast paced life, crime rate and dependency on technology in the urban areas make more people become unacquainted and unfriendly to their neighbours. However, there are measures that can be taken to alleviate this issue. In today’s technology dependent era, people are mostly busy with their own work. Major streets in the cities are filled with busy people walking fast to reach their office or business place. They are even busy talking to their office colleagues and family members over the phone. After they return home late evening, they watch television, use computer and the Internet or spend time with family members. They scarcely have any time to socialise with neighbours. In some scenarios, people do not even know who live next door in city areas. These are the everyday scenarios in the cities where social interactions could be rarely seen as individuals have no time to socialise and much focused on their own work or personal interests. Again, the rampant acceleration of crimes in the urban community makes individual become unnecessarily cautious and suspicious about other people, especially with the people they meet for the very first time. Even trusting their own neighbourhood would be tough for them as they are in constant fear of being harmed. As a result inhabitants of cities tend to become isolated as they are afraid to mingle because of undeveloped acquaintance. Unlike rural areas, where comparatively fewer people live together, city areas are highly populated and it is not unlikely that several thousands of people live in a block. Maintaining social relationship with all of them is this thus quite impossible. On the other hand, considering possible measures to improve a sense of community in the neighbourhood community officials must organise programmes regularly to encourage camaraderie. Secondly, building more parks, social gathering places, community centres and children’s playground in the community could be a good measure to let people socialise and know each other. This is also helpful for meeting friends, bonding with family and neighbours. As a result, people living in the community would develop a sense of friendship. Positive news and events among community members should be highlighted in media to eradicate the fear people have about unknown people. Finally, organising different community groups to help people find others with same interest and to share common passions is a very effective measure to help people enhance their neighbouring bonds and relationship in my opinion. To sum it up, city life and overwhelming population should not be hindrances to our sense of community and our relationship with our neighbours. It would be nicer for the community to develop a friendly environment to create a better place to live in with all the neighbours.
The significant rises of the population,
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fast
paced life, crime rate and dependency on technology in the urban
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areas
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make
more
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people
become unacquainted and
unfriendly
to their
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neighbours
.
However
, there are
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measures
that can
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to alleviate this issue.

In
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today
’s technology dependent era,
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people
are
mostly
busy with their
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own
work. Major streets in the
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cities
are filled
with busy
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people
walking
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fast
to reach their office or business place. They are even busy talking to their office colleagues and family members over the phone. After they return home late evening, they
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watch
television,
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use
computer and the Internet or spend
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time
with family members. They
scarcely
have any
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time
to
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socialise
with
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neighbours
. In
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some
scenarios,
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people
do not even know who
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live
next
door in city
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areas
. These are the everyday scenarios in the
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cities
where social interactions could be rarely
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seen
as individuals have no
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time
to
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socialise
and much focused on their
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own
work or personal interests.

Again, the rampant acceleration of crimes in the urban
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community
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makes
individual become
unnecessarily
cautious and suspicious about
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other
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people
,
especially
with the
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people
they
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meet
for the
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very
first
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time
. Even trusting their
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own
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neighbourhood
would be tough for them as they are in constant fear of
being harmed
.
As a result
inhabitants of
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cities
tend to become isolated as they are afraid to mingle
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because
of undeveloped acquaintance. Unlike rural
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areas
, where
comparatively
fewer
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people
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live
together, city
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areas
are
highly
populated and it is not unlikely that several thousands of
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people
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live
in a block. Maintaining social relationship with all of them is this
thus
quite impossible.

On the
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other
hand, considering possible
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measures
to
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improve
a sense of
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community
in the
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neighbourhood
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community
officials
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must
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organise
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programmes
regularly
to encourage camaraderie.
Secondly
, building more parks, social gathering places,
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community
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centres
and children’s playground in the
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community
could be a
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good
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measure
to
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let
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people
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socialise
and know each
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other
. This is
also
helpful for meeting friends, bonding with family and
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neighbours
.
As a result
,
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people
living in the
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community
would develop a sense of friendship.
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Positive
news and
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events
among
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community
members should
be highlighted
in media to eradicate the fear
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people
have about unknown
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people
.
Finally
,
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organising
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different
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community
groups to
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help
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people
find others with same interest and to share common passions is a
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very
effective
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measure
to
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help
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people
enhance their
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neighbouring
bonds and relationship in my opinion.

To sum it up, city life and overwhelming population should not be hindrances to our sense of
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community
and our relationship with our
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neighbours
. It would be nicer for the
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community
to develop a friendly environment to create a better place to
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live
in with all the
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neighbours
.
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IELTS essay People know less about their neighbours. What are reasons and sollutions

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  American English
5 paragraphs
457 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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