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People in new situations adaption

People in new situations adaption mWDl8
Most of the time it is hard and difficult for the people to face with new situations. Specially in today's modern world and people who are used to their ordinary life, and they are frightened to cope with new changes in their life. They are several reasons for this problem as they are also solutions for them. For instance one of that reasons could be lack of knowledge that can make numerous of trouble for people. By contrast I think the most obvious solution is to add information to ourselves by reading abundance of books with different subjects in order to learn how to adapt to new situations. For example when someone wants to migrate to another place he is supposed to earn information before going to that place. In order to do this he can read news or books that shows how we can adapt with migration. If he doesn't do this, it would be so hard to adapt with this new situation. A second reason might be scarcity of experiment. An experienced person can adapt in a much better way with new situations and get used to it easily. In addition, a good solution is to be more brave and try to be more active in all parts of life so when you face with a new situation you can get used to it simply. As a result getting used to occasional cases would become simpler. In conclusion, try to read more books and be aware of all the situations furthermore attempting for more experiments would make people to face with infrecuent cases easily.
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hard
and difficult for the
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people
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new
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situations
.
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in
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today
's modern world and
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people
who are
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used
to their ordinary life, and they
are frightened
to cope with
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new
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changes
in their life.

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also
solutions for them.
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one of that reasons could be lack of knowledge that can
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make
numerous of trouble for
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people
. By
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think
the most obvious solution is to
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add
information to ourselves by reading abundance of books with
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different
subjects in order to learn how to
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adapt
to
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new
situations.

For example
when someone wants to migrate to another place he
is supposed
to earn information
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before
going to that place. In order to do this he can read
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news
or books that
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shows
how we can
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adapt
with migration. If he doesn't do this, it would be
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so
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hard
to
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adapt
with this
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new
situation.

A second reason might be scarcity of experiment. An experienced person can
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adapt
in a much better way with
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new
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situations
and
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get
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used
to it
easily
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, a
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good
solution is to be more brave and try to be more active in all parts of life
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so
when you face with a
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new
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situation
you can
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get
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used
to it
simply
.
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a result getting
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used
to occasional cases would become simpler.

In conclusion
, try to read more books and be aware of all the
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situations
furthermore
attempting for more experiments would
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make
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people
to face with
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infrecuent
cases
easily
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IELTS essay People in new situations adaption

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
266 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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