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Some people believe GMO (genetically modified organisms) foods are safe, healthy, and sustainable, while others claim the opposite. Please share with us your opinion?

Some people believe GMO (genetically modified organisms) foods are safe, healthy, and sustainable, while others claim the opposite. Please share with us your opinion? Xn3Nw
GMO is the genetically modified organisms, a number of people said that it very dangerous with the life of human. In contrast, i think the GMO is the best food for healthy of humality. Lets me check this ideal Firstly, GMO have a lot of vitamins can make in process develop body to be easier. in fact, all the GMO created of human show that it have nutrius more than the old origin food. For example, usan boll is fastest athlete in the world. In the an interview he was said "The key to having a healthy body is to eat red bananas(GMO foods) every day ". This proves GMO is foods have a lots of nutrius. On other hand GMO verified by scientists it is safe. Furthermore, GMO that doesn't need any preservatives and it can grow very fast. In the end. i beleve people should eat GMO foods if they want a good life
GMO is the
genetically
modified organisms, a number of
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the GMO is the best
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food
for healthy of
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humality
.
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, GMO have
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a lot of
vitamins can
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make
in process develop body to be easier.
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in
fact, all the GMO created of human
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nutrius
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origin
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interview he
was said
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The key to having a healthy body is to eat red bananas(GMO
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foods)
every day
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. This proves GMO is
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foods
have
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a lots
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nutrius
. On other hand GMO verified by scientists it is safe.
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, GMO that doesn't need any preservatives and it can grow
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i
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beleve
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people
should eat GMO
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foods
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good
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life
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IELTS essay Some people believe GMO (genetically modified organisms) foods are safe, healthy, and sustainable, while others claim the opposite. Please share with us your opinion?

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
155 words
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