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What are the main problems of studying abroad?

What are the main problems of studying abroad? k6E8O
When studying abroad, many students experience a variety of problems that, if left unaddressed, can lead to depression and unsatisfactory academic performance. The most common problem is emotional distress. As soon as they move abroad, they begin to miss their loved ones and find it difficult to make new friends. Moreover, financial support may be a problem for them, as well. In many cases, students must learn to be independent of their families and stand on their own two feet. As a result, they must either find a part-time job or apply for financial aid.
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students experience a variety of problems that, if
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either find a part-time job or apply for financial aid.
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IELTS essay What are the main problems of studying abroad?

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  American English
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