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people have different reasons to buy brands

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I think each person have some reasons to buy brands in different conditions. For me, the most important thing to buy brands is Value for Money. I am a study so I have no much of money and I think it will be a waste if I buy a product more than its value. With the fashion products as clothes, shoes, jewelry… my second concern is their fashion. It’s great if I wear the nice and style clothes when going out. For electronic products, Everyone is especially interested in quality. I always give priority to buying products with high quality, even they are higher cost than more. Moreover, some people prefer to buy famous and expensive brands because they believe they are the best and make them stylish. And there are many more reasons but I think these are the basic reasons to buying brand
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as clothes, shoes, jewelry… my second concern is their fashion. It’s great if I wear the nice and style clothes when going out.

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IELTS essay people have different reasons to buy brands

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
144 words
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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