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Nowadays, more and more people are buying things online. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

Nowadays, more and more people are buying things online. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend? 9QK0x
In recent years, people tend to buy things on the Internet by app like shopee, amazon, taobao, ect. This present both pros and cos cons, however, in my opinion, its benefits are much more significant than the drawbacks. It can be said that shopping online has some noteworthy positive effects. Firstly, it allows consumers to browse for the products and checking prises when between these online shop. By that way, everyone can make a better decision to by what they like after taking prices, sizes and model into consideration. According to a recent survey, a lot of people bought many types of goods that was cheaper compared to some shops when they had come to buy directly. Secondly, buyings things on the Internet helps people save a great deal of time because people nowadays are often so caught up with work and study, so shopping online is a wise choice. All they just do is just a click of mouse, they can buy what they need and shipper will deliver their products as soon as possible. On the other hand, shopping online brings to the consumer some disadvantages. First of all, since people are unable to touch or to see the products they want to buy in reality so as a result, they might purchase the goods with poor quality. For instance, as the consumer do not feel happy with the items so they tend to abandon these products or do not want to buy anything in that shop online anymore. This is definitely a waste of money. In conclusion, it is worth considering that there are both advantage and disadvantage of shopping online.
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shopee
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. This present both pros and cos cons,
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positive
effects.
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allows
consumers to browse for the
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products
and checking
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prises
when between these
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online
shop. By that way, everyone can
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make
a better decision to
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a lot of
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people
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bought
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many
types of
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goods
that was cheaper compared to
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some
shops when they had
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come
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directly
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things on the Internet
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save a great deal of time
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people
nowadays are
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often
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caught up with work and study,
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shopping
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is a wise choice. All they
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a click of mouse, they can
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what they need and shipper will deliver their
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,
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brings to the consumer
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are unable to touch or to
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products
they want to
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in reality
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as a result
, they might
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goods
with poor quality.
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so
they tend to abandon these
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products
or do not want to
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buy
anything in that shop
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online
anymore. This is definitely a waste of money.

In conclusion
, it is worth considering that there are both advantage and disadvantage of
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shopping
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IELTS essay Nowadays, more and more people are buying things online. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

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