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Change your company or staying at one place

Change your company or staying at one place m2AjO
Well my preference is to being limited to one organisation. One nuance which should be taken into consideration to this debate question is the fact that working at company for a long period of time have some merits like you can communicate more with your co-workers and have a better interaction with each other. Last but not least have the better team work while it has some cons like not having a change in atmosphere if you aren't satisfied with your job. And changing the company you are working has significant pros especially for who are tired of same experiences and want to have some opportunity to enjoy some new adventurers and you will be more mature. but having been change your organization you are training may have some bad effectes like you dont have enough time to get to know your co-workers
Well my preference is to
being limited
to one
organisation
.

One nuance which should
be taken
into consideration to this debate question is the fact that working at
company
for a long period of time have
some
merits like you can communicate more with your co-workers and have a better interaction with each other. Last
but
not least have the better team work while it has
some
cons like not having a
change
in atmosphere if you aren't satisfied with your job.

And changing the
company
you are working has significant pros
especially
for who
are tired
of same experiences and want to have
some
opportunity to enjoy
some
new adventurers and you will be more mature.
but
having been
change
your
organization
you are training may have
some
bad
effectes
like you
dont
have
enough
time to
get
to know your
co-workers
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IELTS essay Change your company or staying at one place

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
142 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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