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People gerenally know that the environment is important. Howerveer, most people still dont take responsibilies to project the environment.

People gerenally know that the environment is important. Howerveer, most people still dont take responsibilies to project the environment. 9Boe7
Nature is a god given gift to all people and having beautiful, clean environment is essential part nowadays. A range of problems have been identified and need some action to be taken. The major problems are global warming and air pollution in the world. The problem associated with environment is familiar by general public. But, many people think that projecting and taking care of environment is not their duty. Well, projecting environment is individual's duty. Firstly, it is often believed by many people that environment issues are more complex and government should take care of these. Hence, these issues are frequently neglected by society. Also, many citizens think that its future concern and thay are not bothering it at all. Well, because of this casual attitude of society, nature is becoming hazardous to all. One of the best example for this is usage of car. As everyone knows that widespread of car use has enviromental costs. Car exhausts contributes carbon dioxide, lead and many harmful gases, which damage human health. However, people frequently use own cars as it offers flexibility to variety of services and leisure options. There are many environmental friendly solutions for this, which ofter ignored by people. To resolve these problems, its everyone's resonsibility and they need to work on it. Government should impose strict actions and expensive penalty who are harming environment badly. Also, there should be some rewards and compensations who are actively working on projecting natural things and environment. In additional, the attitude towards environmental issues should change. Hence, one should keep in mind that if you save and project greenary of nature now, it will give you healthy and prosperous life in now and in the future.
Nature is a god
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given
gift to all
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people
and having
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beautiful
, clean
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environment
is essential part nowadays. A range of
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problems
have
been identified
and need
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some
action to
be taken
. The major
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problems
are global warming and air pollution in the world. The
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problem
associated with
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environment
is familiar by
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general public
.
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But
,
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many
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people
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think
that projecting and taking care of
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environment
is not their duty. Well, projecting
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environment
is individual's duty.

Firstly
, it is
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often
believed by
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many
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people
that
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environment
issues are more complex and
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government
should take care of these.
Hence
, these issues are
frequently
neglected by society.
Also
,
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many
citizens
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think
that its future concern and
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thay
are not bothering it at all. Well,
because of this
casual attitude of society, nature is becoming hazardous to all. One of the best example for this is usage of
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car
.
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As
everyone knows that widespread of
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car
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use
has
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enviromental
costs.
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Car
exhausts contributes carbon dioxide, lead and
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many
harmful gases, which damage human health.
However
,
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people
frequently
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use
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own
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cars
as it offers flexibility to variety of services and leisure options. There are
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many
environmental friendly solutions for this, which
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ofter
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ignored
by
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people
.

To resolve these
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problems
, its everyone's
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resonsibility and
they need to work on it.
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Government
should impose strict actions and expensive penalty who are harming
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environment
badly
.
Also
, there should be
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some
rewards and compensations who are
actively
working on projecting natural things and
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environment
. In additional, the attitude towards environmental issues should
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change
.

Hence
, one should
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keep
in mind that if you save and project
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greenary
of nature
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now
, it will give you healthy and prosperous life in
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now
and in the future.
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IELTS essay People gerenally know that the environment is important. Howerveer, most people still dont take responsibilies to project the environment.

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