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The Australian bureau metereology to report reliable forecast

The Australian bureau metereology to report reliable forecast N3x5b
The Australian Bureau of Metereology collecting the data for forecast from reliable information on the weather up to the minute. There are four step to produce reliable forecast send to public. The steps are incoming information, analysis and forecasting, preparing the broadcast, and the broadcast. In this report will tell about the process. The first step is incoming information. The data gets from 3 diferent source are satellite, radar and driffting buoy. The radar get information too from satelitte and driffting buoy. The second step is analysis and forecasting. Source from satellite will be report with photo form. The information from radar report in radar screen. Then the synoptic chat will produced from drifting buoy and the radar. The third step is preparing the broadcast. The information that already analysis will be prepare in supposed send to broadcast. The last step is broadcast. The broadcast of forecast there are three way like TV newsreader, radio, and recorded aanoucement. That the report about how forecasts from The Australian Bureau of Meterelogy can produce to public. The data information is very up to date until minute.
The Australian Bureau of
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Metereology
collecting the data for
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forecast
from reliable
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information
on the weather
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up to the minute
. There are four
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step
to produce reliable
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forecast
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send
to public. The
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steps
are incoming
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information
, analysis and forecasting, preparing the
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broadcast
, and the
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broadcast
. In this
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report
will
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tell
about the process.

The
first
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step
is incoming
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information
. The data
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gets
from 3
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diferent
source are satellite,
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radar
and
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driffting
buoy.
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The
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radar
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get
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information
too from
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satelitte
and
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driffting
buoy.
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The
second
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step
is analysis and forecasting. Source from satellite will be
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report
with photo form. The
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information
from
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radar
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report
in
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radar
screen. Then the synoptic chat will
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produced
from drifting buoy and the
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radar
. The third
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step
is preparing the
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broadcast
. The
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information
that already analysis will be
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prepare
in supposed
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send
to
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broadcast
.
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The
last
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step
is
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broadcast
.
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The
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broadcast
of
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forecast
there are
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three way
like TV newsreader, radio, and recorded
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aanoucement
.

That the
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report
about how
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forecasts
from The Australian Bureau of
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Meterelogy
can produce to public. The data
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information
is
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very
up to date until minute.
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IELTS essay The Australian bureau metereology to report reliable forecast

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
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