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People find it very difficult to speak in public or to give a presentation before an audience v.6

People find it very difficult to speak in public or to give a presentation before an audience v. 6
In today’s world, it is of utmost importance that one must learn how to speak & present well in public or private gatherings. In the previous era, self-grooming was of less importance or it is an area where people do not tend to pay much attention, however, nowadays, if you are not well presented or well groomed, people treat you differently. It is observed that many people find it difficult to speak in front of small or large audience or could not present when face masses. There are several factors intact to this lacking trait. One considerable factor is the upbringing. What were the initial learnings of that person, did he learn core areas of self-representation. Second big element is the environment the person is living in. If the person does not face any audience or has limited social life, it is evident that persona would be nervous facing public or would not be able to present. Early education & elementary education plays a vital role & grooming a person to well present himself to larger audience. Meeting a gathering of two three people or presenting or speaking in front of 100 people, being a center of audience is altogether a different experience. One important element that should not be overlooked is the self-ability to face large audience. Some people are God gifted being very confident that they do not feel hesitation in facing masses. To recapitulate this argument, considering the importance of confidence, one must pay attention to practice addressing large audience at the time of education. If you have experienced presenting in front of people, it will be easy for you to present well & address large audience where you are practically working in a professional environment.
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must
learn how to speak
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well
in public or private gatherings. In the previous era, self-grooming was of less importance or it is an area where
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people
do not tend to pay much attention,
however
, nowadays, if you are not
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well
presented or
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well
groomed,
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people
treat you
differently
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is observed
that
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many
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people
find it difficult to speak in front of
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small
or
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large
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audience
or could not
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present
when face masses.

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person
, did he learn core areas of self-representation. Second
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big
element is the environment the
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person
is living in. If the
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person
does not face any
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audience
or has limited social life, it is evident that persona would be nervous facing public or would not be able to present.

Early education
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; elementary education plays a vital role
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; grooming a
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to
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well
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himself to larger
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audience
. Meeting a gathering of two three
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people
or presenting or speaking in front of 100
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people
, being a center of
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audience
is altogether a
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different
experience.

One
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important
element that should not
be overlooked
is the self-ability to face
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large
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audience
.
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Some
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people
are God gifted being
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very
confident that they do not feel hesitation in facing masses.

To recapitulate this argument, considering the importance of confidence, one
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must
pay attention to practice addressing
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large
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audience
at the time of education. If you have experienced presenting in front of
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people
, it will be easy for you to
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present
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well
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&amp
; address
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large
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audience
where you are
practically
working in a professional environment.
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
31Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes
Language is the road map of a culture. It tells you where its people come from and where they are going.
Rita Mae Brown

IELTS essay People find it very difficult to speak in public or to give a presentation before an audience v. 6

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
289 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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