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people debt for buying this they cant afford

people debt for buying this they cant afford eMVp

People are these days focusing manily on the pride of having financial outlooks. Resuming from the morning to the end of the day they are living in a differt mindsets. The way of thinking is enhancing more on one, s own circumstances. So, everyone started buying luxurious things and gadgets for debt rather than thinking of their own financial background. This passion of luxurious outlook is playing an important role in one's life. Reasons to such behaviour -Judging the financial status of a person through the things he/she use- is the most way people choose to judge these days. -Everyone is just hardly trying for the ways and reasons to make them stand out rich. -Inorder, to maintain relation with rich is also a good reason where people are buying things that they cant afford. Actions that can prevent people from behaving like this - May include in the changes of society's way of thinking -Their estimation of one's financial status should be based on the family's income but not just on the things people use. -Self confidence and self esteem with what we have is the powerful weapon one should wear in the society. -Friendly relationships should be based on the attitude and personal behaviour of a person rather than on the way they look and the way they wear. This prospective of living is strictly hitting the changes of one's livelihood. I can summerize this through a situation now people are involved into is using a gadget above their financial status and debting just to wear rich looks.

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People
 are these days focusing Possible spelling mistake found.mainlyManilamanlymanila
manily
 on the pride of having You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfiscaleconomiccommercialmonetary
financial
 outlooks. Resuming from the morning to the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the day they are living in a Possible spelling mistake found.differdiffers
differt
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own
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, everyone This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 buying luxurious things and gadgets for debt rather
 than thinking of their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
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financial
 background. This passion of luxurious outlook is playing an This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 role in one's life.

Reasons to such Possible spelling mistake. 'behaviour' is British English.behavior
behaviour


-Judging the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfiscaleconomiccommercialmonetary
financial
 status of a person through the things he/she This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
- is the most way You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 choose to judge these days.

-Everyone is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 hardly trying for the ways and reasons to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 them stand out rich.

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-Inorder
, to maintain relation with rich is also
 a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 reason where You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 are buying things that they Did you mean "can't" or "cannot"?can'tcannot
cant
 afford.

Actions that can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :preclude
prevent
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 from behaving like this

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-
 May include in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 of society's way of thinking

-Their estimation of one's You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfiscaleconomiccommercialmonetary
financial
 status should be based
 on the family's income This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 on the things You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
.

-Self confidence and This word is normally spelled with hyphen.self-esteem
self esteem
 with what we have is the powerful weapon one should wear in the society.

-Friendly relationships should be based
 on the attitude and personal Possible spelling mistake. 'behaviour' is British English.behavior
behaviour
 of a person rather
 than on the way they look and the way they wear.

This prospective of living is strictly
 hitting the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 of one's livelihood. I can Possible spelling mistake found.summarize
summerize
 this through a situation This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
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people
are involved
 into is using a gadget above their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfiscaleconomiccommercialmonetary
financial
 status and Possible spelling mistake found.debutingdebatingdentingdebitingdeb ting
debting
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 to wear rich looks. 