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"Gender equality" is the most fighting factor of the society.

"Gender equality" is the most fighting factor of the society. Dk5W
"Gender equality" is the most fighting factor of the society. I agree with the term -' Women also have the equal potential as men'. A house-holding women implies a great person who manages all the simple and hardest tasks of the day. Managing skills are born qualities in women. Likewise, they are far a good strikers at various fields of society like politicians, entrepreneurs, artists, chefs, actors, labour and etc. In some fields society is still discriminating gender where that particular citizen groups should purely get educated and believe in women and her strength proportional to men. Not many women are really satisfied in achieving the sports goals in entering the football teams, cricket teams. Just considering the sports wear which is similar for both men and women. There lies many sectors where women are less prominent and least bothered compared to men. The mindset of the society should be changed and allow women to elaborate their skills and ideologies as freely as men do. The cooperation sectors also should provide more and more opportunities annually. The main obstacles like lack of courage, financial crises is also effecting the women to stand out of the group. These typical issues should be monitored and help educating the women that they are quiet capable as men in the world. Education is the platform to change such mindsets of growing society. The schools should be productive and play the important role in abolishing the gender inequality. I hope the society to step out of the gender discrimination soon and and be the supportive spine to women. Thank you.
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Gender equality
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is the most fighting factor of the
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society
. I
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agree
with the term -'
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also
have the equal potential as
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men
'. A
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women
implies a great person who manages all the simple and hardest tasks of the day.

Managing
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skills
are born
qualities in
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women
.
Likewise
, they are far a
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good
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strikers
at various fields of
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society
like politicians, entrepreneurs, artists, chefs, actors,
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labour
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. In
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some
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fields
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society
is
still
discriminating gender where that particular citizen groups should
purely
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get
educated and believe in
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women
and her strength proportional to
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men
. Not
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many
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women
are
really
satisfied in achieving the sports goals in entering the football teams, cricket teams.
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Just
considering the sports wear which is similar for both
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men
and women.

There lies
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many
sectors where
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women
are less prominent and least bothered compared to
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men
. The mindset of the
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society
should be
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changed
and
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allow
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women
to elaborate their
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skills
and ideologies as
freely
as
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men
do. The cooperation sectors
also
should provide more and more opportunities
annually
.

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The
main obstacles like lack of courage, financial crises is
also
effecting the
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women
to stand out of the group. These typical issues should
be monitored
and
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help
The verb 'help' is used with an infinitive: "to educate" or "educate".
educating
the
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women
that they are
Did you mean "quite"? 'quiet' means 'silent', 'quite' mean 'very' or 'to a moderate extent'
quiet
capable as
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men
in the world. Education is the platform to
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change
such mindsets of growing
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society
. The schools should be productive and play the
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important
role in abolishing the gender inequality. I hope the
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society
to step out of the gender discrimination
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soon
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and and
be the supportive spine to
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women
. Thank you.
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IELTS essay "Gender equality" is the most fighting factor of the society.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
265 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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