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People becoming creator rather than buying

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Nowadays people becoming creator or buyer. In other words, we are spending our days among reading, eating, and buying many things which we are not need it. If they are know true happiness, it is come from help others or fight to get your dreams. For exemplified, Egypt suffers from consider the biggest place you can find many buyer compare with creator that lead to many young man unemployment to be criminals. Therefore, all government should be give chances for young man to find jobs and change mindset of new generation by improve education.
Nowadays
people
becoming creator or buyer.
In other words
, we are spending our days among reading, eating, and buying
many
things which we are not
need
it. If they are
know
true happiness, it is
come
from
help
others or fight to
get
your dreams. For exemplified, Egypt suffers from consider the biggest place you can find
many
buyer compare with creator that lead to
many
young
man
unemployment to be criminals.
Therefore
, all
government
should be give chances for young
man
to find jobs and
change
mindset of new generation by
improve
education.
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IELTS essay People becoming creator rather than buying

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
94 words
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