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People becoming creator rather than buying

People becoming creator rather than buying Knmq1

Nowadays people becoming creator or buyer. In other words, we are spending our days among reading, eating, and buying many things which we are not need it. If they are know true happiness, it is come from help others or fight to get your dreams. For exemplified, Egypt suffers from consider the biggest place you can find many buyer compare with creator that lead to many young man unemployment to be criminals. Therefore, all government should be give chances for young man to find jobs and change mindset of new generation by improve education.

Nowadays This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 becoming creator or buyer. In other words
, we are spending our days among reading, eating, and buying This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 things which we are not Consider using a past participle here: "needed".needed
need
 it. If they are Did you mean "now" or "no"?nowno
know
 true happiness, it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 from This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 others or fight to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 your dreams. For exemplified, Egypt suffers from consider the biggest place you can find This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 buyer compare with creator that lead to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 young This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualresidentcitizen
man
 unemployment to be criminals. Therefore
, all This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 should be give chances for young This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualresidentcitizen
man
 to find jobs and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 mindset of new generation by This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 education. 