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People are having more and more sugar-based drinks. Why? What can be done to encourage people to drink less?

People are having more and more sugar-based drinks. Why? What can be done to encourage people to drink less? Oy06G

In the advanced pace world, The consumption of sugar-based drinks increased by the people popular stratum of the society tends to believe that there are several causes of soft drinks, and government should take some steps to overcome this problem. I would like to confer it at length in the upcoming paragraph. Commencing with prominent reason why individual prefer to drink beverages. First and the foremost, consumer buy these items by seeing their attractive advertisements and promotions. Similarly, Drink manufacturers promote their product from re-on the personalities so, youngsters are attracted to words and healthy drinking items. Four example, Salman Khan is promoting a sugar-based drink called coca-cola many of their followers purchase product by watching him. Although it affect the health of the community

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drink
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buy
 these items by seeing their attractive advertisements and promotions. Similarly
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Drink
 manufacturers promote their product from re-on the personalities This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
, youngsters are attracted
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drink
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many
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purchase
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