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People are either working till late night or migrating to a different place for the sake of job. Is this advantageous or disadvantageous. Give you opinion and explain why, with examples.

People are either working till late night or migrating to a different place for the sake of job. Is this advantageous or disadvantageous. Give you opinion and explain why, with examples. XGkow
Nowadays people are showing more interest in jobs for earning rewards, promotions and mostly handsome remunerations. For that reason, some persons are exaggerating themselves to work either midnights or travelling to a new site for acquiring jobs. In my opinion, The disadvantages outweigh the advantages, so we will be focusing on the disadvantages. Working till the last hours of the night is really pressured situation for oneself and also ruin family relationships. Every person desires to lead a luxurious life for their family. But meanwhile, that person unable to find a moment for himself to spend quality life with his loving ones. For instance, in many developed countries, everyone is more interested in earning and some children of them, due to irresponsible parents, they are ending as a drug addict and choosing wrong paths. Emigrating to the different community for the sake of work has some challenges such as weather, language and culture of those regions. For example, In the United States, some parts have drastic climatic conditions in which it will be very difficult to retain in that country for the long term. They have to learn new languages and traditions of those areas such that they can stay and communicate easily with others. Finally, I would like to conclude that working late at night or moving to a different country has more disadvantages than advantages. It is better to work for a few hours so that they can spend valuable space with the family. If anyone Immigrating to newer locations, it may be difficult to adapt to its environmental conditions.
Nowadays
people
are showing more interest in jobs for earning rewards, promotions and
mostly
handsome remunerations. For that reason,
some
persons are exaggerating themselves to work either
midnights
or travelling to a new site for acquiring jobs. In my opinion, The disadvantages outweigh the advantages,
so
we will be focusing on the disadvantages.

Working till the last hours of the night is
really
pressured situation for oneself and
also
ruin family relationships. Every person desires to lead a luxurious life for their family.
But
meanwhile, that person unable to find a moment for himself to spend quality life with his loving ones.
For instance
, in
many
developed countries
, everyone is more interested in earning and
some
children of them, due to irresponsible parents, they are ending as a drug addict and choosing
wrong
paths.

Emigrating to the
different
community for the sake of work has
some
challenges such as weather, language and culture of those regions.
For example
, In the United States,
some
parts have drastic climatic conditions in which it will be
very
difficult to retain in that country for the long term. They
have to
learn new languages and traditions of those areas such that they can stay and communicate
easily
with others.

Finally
, I would like
to conclude
that working late at night or moving to a
different
country has more disadvantages than advantages. It is better to work for a few hours
so
that they can spend valuable space with the family. If anyone
Immigrating
to newer locations, it may be difficult to adapt to its environmental conditions.
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IELTS essay People are either working till late night or migrating to a different place for the sake of job. Is this advantageous or disadvantageous. Give you opinion and explain why, with examples.

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