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People are eating a lot of foreign food instead of locally produced food. Are advantages more than disadvantages .

In present days, majority of multitudes having readymade food as compared to homemade food. Despite having a few merits, there are plethora of drawbacks in behind this. Let us deliberate some compelling reasons which will lead towards a logical inference. Discussing the first benefit, it is most intrinsic one is that save the time. To justify, undoubtedly, mostly parents are workaholic. Consequently, not only I but also they have not enough time to prepare fresh meal at home. With a doubt they easily buy the fast food at the stores. Being due to junk food individuals can reeling under overweight which cause a number of health ailments, which leads to cardiovascular diseases and diabetes. For instance, I am a scholar. Therefore, I have not time may to prepare food at home. Hence, I bought one burger and few snacks in the school canteen and I am suffered from obesity.
In present days,
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majority of
multitudes having
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readymade
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food
as compared to homemade
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food
. Despite having a few merits, there are plethora of drawbacks in behind this.
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Let
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compelling reasons which will lead towards a logical inference.

Discussing the
first
benefit, it is
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most
intrinsic one is that save the time. To justify,
undoubtedly
,
mostly
parents are workaholic.
Consequently
, not
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only
I
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but
also
they have not
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enough
time to prepare fresh meal at home. With a doubt they
easily
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buy
the
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fast
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food
at the stores. Being due to junk
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
individuals can reeling under overweight which cause a number of health ailments, which leads to cardiovascular diseases and diabetes.
For instance
, I am a scholar.
Therefore
, I have not time may to prepare
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
at home.
Hence
, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bought
one burger and few snacks in the school
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
canteen and
I
am suffered
from obesity.

IELTS essay People are eating a lot of foreign food instead of locally produced food. Are advantages more than disadvantages.

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  American English
2 paragraphs
149 words
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