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People are eating a lot of foreign food instead of locally produced food. Are advantages more than disadvantages .

In present days, majority of multitudes having readymade food as compared to homemade food. Despite having a few merits, there are plethora of drawbacks in behind this. Let us deliberate some compelling reasons which will lead towards a logical inference. Discussing the first benefit, it is most intrinsic one is that save the time. To justify, undoubtedly, mostly parents are workaholic. Consequently, not only I but also they have not enough time to prepare fresh meal at home. With a doubt they easily buy the fast food at the stores. Being due to junk food individuals can reeling under overweight which cause a number of health ailments, which leads to cardiovascular diseases and diabetes. For instance, I am a scholar. Therefore, I have not time may to prepare food at home. Hence, I bought one burger and few snacks in the school canteen and I am suffered from obesity.

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most
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, mostly
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food
 at the stores. Being due to junk You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
food
 individuals can reeling under overweight which cause a number of health ailments, which leads to cardiovascular diseases and diabetes. For instance
, I am a scholar. Therefore
, I have not time may to prepare You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
food
 at home. Hence
, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
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canteen and
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 from obesity. 