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Let's go bats and play here

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It is known for everyone that bats are perceived to be the mammals which hunt at nights. However, they have an engineering problem: they can't find their ways at night. Although some people might disagree with the opinion and state that they should change their habits as nocturnal animals, it is an undeniable fact that the daytime economy has been exploited by other animals. What is more, there are some animals which can manufacture their own lights such as fireflies and some fish. They can be visible because of their bright colours and lights from a distance. Accordig to some researches, blind people can even feel the obstacles in front of them by using " facial vision". The reason why it is called like this is that people can feel with the help of their faces.

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IELTS essay Let's go bats and play here

Essay

American English

1 paragraphs

136 words

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4.0

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

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Lexical Resource: 6.0

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Grammatical Range: 6.5

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Task Achievement: 5.0

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