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Let's go bats and play here

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It is known for everyone that bats are perceived to be the mammals which hunt at nights. However, they have an engineering problem: they can't find their ways at night. Although some people might disagree with the opinion and state that they should change their habits as nocturnal animals, it is an undeniable fact that the daytime economy has been exploited by other animals. What is more, there are some animals which can manufacture their own lights such as fireflies and some fish. They can be visible because of their bright colours and lights from a distance. Accordig to some researches, blind people can even feel the obstacles in front of them by using " facial vision". The reason why it is called like this is that people can feel with the help of their faces.
It
is known
for everyone that bats
are perceived
to be the mammals which hunt at nights.
However
, they have an engineering problem: they can't find their ways at night. Although
some
people
might disagree with the opinion and state that they should
change
their habits as nocturnal animals, it is an undeniable fact that the daytime economy has
been exploited
by other animals.
What is more
, there are
some
animals which can manufacture their
own
lights such as fireflies and
some
fish. They can be visible
because
of their bright
colours
and lights from a distance.
Accordig
to
some
researches, blind
people
can even feel the obstacles in front of them by using
"
facial vision
"
. The reason why it
is called
like this is that
people
can feel with the
help
of their faces.
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IELTS essay Let's go bats and play here

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