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emails are the most valuable tool of communication in the 20 first Century to what extent do you agree or disagree

emails are the most valuable tool of communication in the 20 first Century My97a
Nowdays, the best option of communicating with others in recent two decades is emailing. Sending on letter by email turned to a best solution of a convenient connection which is true. Recently, several new develop applications showed up. In addition, they can handle numerous and various tasks like sharing Media space. However, to create a highly formal relationship with other organisation, emails are essential. Generally, by growing up the words all the methods change rapidly, and so emails are not out of this circle. As quality of technology is increasing significantly, old style ideas are replaced with advanced one. Moreover, researchers are always designing many helpful programs to make human's life satisfying. For instance, there are other functional applications likewise telegram that is rich in effective facilities. Emails are not suitable for huge gigabytes of documents while other programs solved this issue. If we see this case from other view, we realised that those social activities are mostly private areas. Therefore, they provide a close place for people to stay in a friendly connection. Furthermore, some of apps must be signed up by phone numbers that are visible for others which is not satisfactory. Further, if they want to keep their privacy from strangers is not effective. Emails are a helpful way to send formal or official letters. For example, being in touch with other universities all over the world requires a Gmail or Yahoo messenger. In conclusion, using emails is followed by its cons and pros. They can not provide a massive space for sharing large files. But they can be still a practical and acceptable design for the vast majority of communities.
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Nowdays
, the best option of communicating with others in recent two decades is emailing. Sending on letter by email turned to
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a
best solution of a convenient connection which is true. Recently, several new develop applications
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
showed
up.
In addition
, they can handle numerous and various tasks like sharing Media space.
However
, to create a
highly
formal relationship with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
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organisation
, emails are essential.

Generally
, by growing up the words all the methods
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
rapidly
, and
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so
emails are not out of this circle. As quality of technology is increasing
significantly
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
old
style
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ideas
are replaced
with advanced one.
Moreover
, researchers are always designing
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
helpful programs to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
human's life satisfying.
For instance
, there are
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
functional applications
likewise
telegram
that is
rich in effective facilities. Emails are not suitable for huge gigabytes of documents while
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
programs solved this issue.

If we
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see
this case from
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
view, we
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realised
that those social activities are
mostly
private areas.
Therefore
, they provide a close place for
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
to stay in a friendly connection.
Furthermore
,
After 'some of', you should use 'the' ("some of the apps") or simply say "some apps".
some of apps
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
be signed
up by phone numbers that are visible for others which is not satisfactory.
Further
, if they want to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
their privacy from strangers is not effective. Emails are a helpful way to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
formal or official letters.
For example
, being in touch with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
universities all over the world requires a Gmail or Yahoo messenger.

In conclusion
, using emails
is followed
by its cons and pros. They can not provide a massive space for sharing large files.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
they can be
still
a practical and acceptable design for the vast majority of communities.
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IELTS essay emails are the most valuable tool of communication in the 20 first Century

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  American English
4 paragraphs
274 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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