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Patterns of organizing your ideas as a paragraph

Patterns of organizing your ideas as a paragraph VPJO6
Patterns of organization show the relationships between supporting details in paragraphs, essays, and chapters. The organization of the supporting details helps you understand how an author thinks and helps you remember what you read. While the table below explains the characteristics of the patterns and gives sample signals and sentences, keep in mind that there may be additional signals not mentioned. Plus, a topic sentence or thesis statement might not predict the organization of the paragraph. Read the entire selection. Not every piece of writing fits neatly into these categories. In the real world, many texts contain sections and passages that combine two or more patterns of organization.
Patterns of
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the relationships between supporting
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in paragraphs, essays, and chapters.

The
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organization
of the supporting
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details
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helps
you understand how an author
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thinks
and
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helps
you remember

what you read. While the table below
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explains
the characteristics of the patterns and gives sample signals and

sentences,
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keep
in mind that there may be additional signals not mentioned. Plus, a topic sentence or thesis

statement might not predict the
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organization
of the paragraph. Read the entire selection. Not every piece of

writing fits
neatly
into these categories. In the real world,
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many
texts contain sections and passages that combine

two or more patterns of
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.
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IELTS essay Patterns of organizing your ideas as a paragraph

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
108 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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