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past people are friendly than they are today.

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I disagree that past people are friendlier than they are today. In my view, friendly or not friendly is regardless of time factor. However, if compare people in the past and people nowadays, I think today generations are indeed friendlier than the old ancestors. Technologies, mixed of cultures and education are important factors that make people nowadays being friendly widely. First of all, technologies help people to expand their welcome to new friends any corners of the world. Take a social media called facebook as example. It has a significant role for people all ages to keep connect. . .
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in the past and
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facebook
as example. It has a significant role for
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all ages to
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connect.
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IELTS essay past people are friendly than they are today.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
100 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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