It has become increasingly common for young adults to move away from their family home rather than continue to live with their parents. While some claim moving away from parent’s has benefits, this essay will argue that continuing to live with parents might be a better option for young adults. Two reasons for this are financial stability and easier access to parental wisdom and guidance.
To begin with, it is common for young adults to want to move away as soon as they have graduated from universities. In fact, this may bring drawbacks, as they will lose the parental safety net that safeguards financial stability. In my country Indonesia, for example, houses prices are so high that without a high-paying job young adults will struggle to pay rent, food and transportation costs. Without a good start in adult life they may end up taking a job with low salary or one that is not their dream job.
The second notable point is that young adults are likely to lack self-confidence and self-respect. They tend to be self-willed and may become egoistic in their decision-making. For instance, there is a public figure in Indonesia who married young, but cannot maintain a good relationship with her husband because of always using emotion to solve problems. This case shows that wisdom and guidance which are given by parents play an important role in our lives.
In conclusion, for young adults, living with their parents instead of moving away from their family home might a good measure in terms of financial stability and access to parental wisdom and guidance. Based on the tangible evidence above, young adults might reconsider their willingness to move away from their family to avoid the drawbacks in their future lives.
It has become
increasingly
common for
young
adults
to
move
away
from their family home
rather
than continue to
live
with their
parents
. While
some
claim moving
away
from
parent’s
has benefits, this essay will argue that continuing to
live
with
parents
might be a better option for
young
adults
. Two reasons for this are financial stability and easier access to parental wisdom and guidance.
To
begin
with, it is common for
young
adults
to want to
move
away
as
soon
as they have graduated from universities. In fact, this may bring drawbacks, as they will lose the parental safety net that safeguards financial stability. In my country Indonesia,
for example
,
houses
prices are
so
high that without a high-paying job
young
adults
will struggle to pay rent, food and transportation costs. Without a
good
start
in adult life they may
end
up taking a job with low salary or one
that is
not their dream job.
The second notable point is that
young
adults
are likely to lack self-confidence and self-respect. They tend to be self-willed and may become egoistic in their decision-making.
For instance
, there is a public figure in Indonesia who married
young
,
but
cannot maintain a
good
relationship with her husband
because
of always using emotion to solve problems. This case
shows
that wisdom and guidance which are
given
by
parents
play an
important
role in our
lives
.
In conclusion
, for
young
adults
, living with their
parents
instead
of moving
away
from their family home might a
good
measure in terms of financial stability and access to parental wisdom and guidance. Based on the tangible evidence above,
young
adults
might reconsider their willingness to
move
away
from their family to avoid the drawbacks in their future
lives
.
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