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Part 1 is about watching television, part 2 provides discussion about family's friend, and part 3 is about friendship. v.1

Part 1 is about watching television, part 2 provides discussion about family's friend, and part 3 is about friendship. v. 1
In the contemporary era, there is a heated argument over the issue that the domain has always been a worldwide trouble because authorities are not assigning a penalty in opposition to the lawbreaker. The following paragraphs would highlight my personal perspective along with an apt example. I see eye to eye with a central idea for various reasons, First and foremost reason is Ozone layer depletion, Green house effect and Global warming these are caused by human activities. Therefore, pollution check is must. Secondly Deforestation, In order to build Malls and Manufacturing units chopping of trees is happening. Thirdly usage of Plastic Materials leads to a result of affecting the Earths surroundings which adversely affect wildlife and human life. Adding the further increase in population shows the requirement of more and more resources and growth in inhabitants results in expansion of contamination. Last but not least Lowered biodiversity there is the epitome of causing impurities. Having discussed the statements, I would like to give an example, one of my friend constructed chemical products industry near the source of a water project, but no serious action took place, Authorities received a notice to vacate the place as soon as possible. Instead of the notice they would have asked to fill the loss of the water project. Hammering the last nail, I am of the opinion that council members should allot strict fines for each consequence caused by a human activity, administration department should also conduct awareness programs to educate the people who are unaware of these statistical information of adulteration.
In the contemporary era, there is a heated argument over the issue that the domain has always been a worldwide trouble
because
authorities are not assigning a penalty in opposition to the lawbreaker. The following paragraphs would highlight my personal perspective along with an apt example.

I
see
eye to eye with a central
idea
for various reasons,
First
and foremost reason is Ozone layer depletion, Green
house
effect and Global warming these
are caused
by human activities.
Therefore
, pollution
check
is
must
.
Secondly
Deforestation, In order to build Malls and Manufacturing units chopping of trees is happening.
Thirdly
usage of Plastic Materials leads to a result of affecting the Earths surroundings which
adversely
affect wildlife and human life.

Adding the
further
increase in population
shows
the requirement of more and more resources and growth in inhabitants results in expansion of contamination. Last
but
not
least
Lowered biodiversity there is the epitome of causing impurities.

Having discussed the statements, I would like to give an example, one of my friend constructed chemical
products
industry near the source of a water project,
but
no serious action took place, Authorities received a notice to vacate the place as
soon
as possible.
Instead
of the notice they would have asked to
fill the loss of
the water project.

Hammering the last nail, I am of the opinion that council members should allot strict fines for each consequence caused by a human activity, administration department should
also
conduct awareness programs to educate the
people
who are unaware of these statistical information of adulteration.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay Part 1 is about watching television, part 2 provides discussion about family's friend, and part 3 is about friendship. v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
259 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 7.0
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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