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Parents should be held responsible of their children troubles in public

Parents should be held responsible of their children troubles in public bOJ1Q

I absolutely agree with the statement that parents should be held responsible of their children troubles in school or in public for two main reasons. First and foremost, parents take the most important role in their house because they are their children´s model. In their early age, children learn a lot from their parents and when they grow up parents should educate and teach them what is wrong and right. Second but not least, children are the reflection of their home. How a child behaves in school or in public is dependent upon how his parents have taught him or how they themselves behave. For example, if a child sees violence in his house, he will grow up with a violent nature. To sum up, parents have the responsibility to educate and instill values in the childhood. The behavior of their children in the society depends on them and they should be held responsible of their children troubles.

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 troubles in school or in public for two main reasons.

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, he will grow up with a violent nature.

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parents
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 troubles. 