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Parents often give children everything they ask for and do what they like. Is it good for children? What are the consequences when they grow up?

Parents often give children everything they ask for and do what they like. Is it good for children? What are the consequences when they grow up? E3VxR
Parental approach to bring up young children surely has crucial role to play their development. Some parents indulge their children in higher-level which I think, led to negative impact on children future life. To begin with, when there is no limit to indulge parents to show toward their children, these children will become highly dependend on their parents and therefor desicion making will turn to tough issue to tackle for their whole life. When such a child grow up,
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IELTS essay Parents often give children everything they ask for and do what they like. Is it good for children? What are the consequences when they grow up?

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79 words
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