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Parents are the best teachers. What are the reasons behind it. Give suitable example to support your answer. v.3

Parents are the best teachers. What are the reasons behind it. Give suitable example to support your answer. v. 3
There is no even a shadow of doubt that parents are the best teachers for their children because they play paramount role for the development of their kids. To support my statement, I will discuss what are the reasons behind it before reaching at any conclusion. There are ample reasons behind this phenomenon, but most important which we can take into account is that parents want to make their children good member of society. Therefore, from their childhood period they give enough knowledge about various aspects such as parents teach good moral values, communication skills and so on. What is more, parents are good teachers because they shot right path to children and protect them from bad habits. Moreover, parents are next to God because they always want to become them more successful in life they support them and give good advice like what is right for them and what is wrong. As we all know that every successful person get success due to his or her parents. For instance, prime minister Narendra modi, who is the successful person and famous celebrity. He get success because his mother taught him good skills which proved helpful for getting success. To conclude, according to my point of view, parents are the best teachers who teach us lessons and give proper knowledge to tackle with problems. It is rightly said that person learn his first lesson of life from his home.
There is no even a shadow of doubt that
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parents
are the best teachers for their children
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because
they play paramount role for the development of their kids. To support my statement, I will discuss what are the reasons behind it
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before
reaching at any conclusion.

There are ample reasons behind this phenomenon,
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but
most
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important
which we can take into account is that
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parents
want to
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make
their children
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good
member of society.
Therefore
, from their childhood period they give
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enough
knowledge about various aspects such as
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parents
teach
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good
moral values, communication
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skills
and
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so
on.
What is more
,
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parents
are
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good
teachers
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because
they shot right path to children and protect them from
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bad
habits.

Moreover
,
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parents
are
next
to God
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because
they always want to become them more successful in life they support them and give
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good
advice like what is right for them and what is
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wrong
. As we all know that every successful person
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get
success due to
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his or her
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parents
.
For instance
, prime minister Narendra
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modi
, who is the successful person and
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famous celebrity
. He
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get
success
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because
his mother taught him
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good
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skills
which proved helpful for getting success.

To conclude
, according to my point of view,
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parents
are the best teachers who teach us lessons and give proper knowledge to tackle with problems. It is
rightly
said
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that person learn
his
first
lesson of life from his home.
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4Mistakes

IELTS essay Parents are the best teachers. What are the reasons behind it. Give suitable example to support your answer. v. 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
238 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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