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Parents and teachers think more rules will benefit children and protect them from danger do you agree or disagree with it

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It is the principal duty of parents and teachers to help their children evolve into a responsible citizen to survive in the modern society. For this, they make use of every possible mode to help their children mould into disciplined one. One of such method is lining more rules and providing lesser liberity. However, I opposed it as because it generates hindrance in their growing up period. To commence with, firstly, there are those set of people who asserts that making large numbers of rules would transform jouveniles into the disciplined citizens in future. For instance, children who are nutured in much discilpne environs behave unpredicatbly mischievous in the absence of their guardians and when they left alone. Furthermore, creating number of restrictions would provide opportunity to parents to be fearless a their children would not cought by crimes and drugs. For example, more rules buils the sense of terror in jouvenile's mind which helps keeping them far away from uncivilized deeds. On flip side, other set of individuals advocates that there will be no utilization of implimenting rules due to the fact that they have a tender age which discloses that they do not have adequate sense of right and wrong facts. Although, being parents and scholars it is our fundamental duty to create certain amount of rules and shed light on the right path to follow for them. In the nut shell, I personally do not believe in the conservative statement of making more rules and alloting small amount of freedom. Also, this reduce the psychological and physical growth. I am not advocating that we should completely remove the restriction as because this will make young generation as fearless from parents and teachers and this would definitely end up by making them wild civilians
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help
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children
evolve into a responsible citizen to survive in the modern society. For this, they
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make
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children
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into disciplined one. One of such method is lining more
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rules
and providing lesser
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liberity
.
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it generates hindrance in their growing up period.

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, there are those set of
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people
who asserts that making large numbers of
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rules
would transform
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jouveniles
into the disciplined citizens
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in future
.
For instance
,
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children
who are
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nutured
in much
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environs behave
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mischievous in the absence of their guardians and when they
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left
alone.

Furthermore
, creating number of restrictions would provide opportunity to
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parents
to be fearless a their
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children
would not
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cought
by crimes and drugs.
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, more
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rules
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buils
the sense of terror in
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jouvenile
's mind which
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helps
keeping them far away from uncivilized deeds.

On flip side, other set of individuals advocates that there will be no utilization of
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implimenting
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rules
due to the fact that they have a tender age which discloses that they do not have adequate sense of right and
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wrong
facts. Although, being
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parents
and scholars it is our fundamental duty to create certain amount of
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rules
and shed light on the right path to follow for them.

In the nut shell, I
personally
do not believe in the conservative statement of making more
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rules
and
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alloting
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small
amount of freedom.
Also
, this
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reduce
the psychological and physical growth. I am not advocating that we should completely remove the restriction as
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because
this will
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make
young generation as fearless from
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parents
and teachers and this would definitely
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end
up by making them wild
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civilians
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IELTS essay Parents and teachers think more rules will benefit children and protect them from danger with it

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