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Parenting courses could equip parents with necessary skills and knowledge to help them educate their children.

Parenting courses could equip parents with necessary skills and knowledge to help them educate their children. 66VMG

To begin with, many parents these days are tied up with their work and career, which can indirectly create distance from other family members, resulting in the lack of understanding and sympathy between them and their children. For instance, as being too busy, parents usually don't have time for their troublesome teenagers, who are going through adolescence, causing low self-esteem, loneliness and depression in the juvenile. Attending those courses could guide adults how to be more thoughtful and be able to be on the same wavelength with their sons and daughters, leading to proper ways to resolve problems in raising children and have a better relationship with each other.

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