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Paraphraseing article about Oman

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Omanis have constantly taken pride in their role as the owners of an old civilization. In Oman the national heritage has a considerable value. Omanis have found a formula that gathering history and the present as a global role model in how to combine authenticity and innovation. They haven’t failed in achieving a way of life that combines historical and modern elements in social and cultural life aspects. Omani affiliation is not about belonging to the land only; actually it is also identity as a philosophy or lifestyle. Collaboration, contribution and close interrelationship between the different state institutions particularly institutions which take part of Omani citizens in the decision-making, are the main features of this lifestyle. Leadership decision is what we build and work according to the requirements, needs and realities of Oman which are suitable with stages that we want to achieve. The Sultanate’s long-term strategy was adopted in order to improve a modern state, with a special emphasis on the improvement and protection of Omani heritage and public culture.

Omanis have constantly
 taken pride in their role as the owners of an This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 civilization. In Oman the national heritage has a considerable value. Omanis have found a formula that gathering history and the present as a global role model in how to combine authenticity and innovation. They haven’t failed in achieving a way of life that combines historical and modern elements in social and cultural life aspects.

Omani affiliation is not about belonging to the land This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
; actually it is also
 identity as a philosophy or lifestyle. Collaboration, contribution and close interrelationship between the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 state institutions particularly
 institutions which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :participate
take part
 of Omani citizens in the decision-making, Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: "is".is
are
 the main features of this lifestyle. Leadership decision is what we build and work according to the requirements, needs and realities of Oman which are suitable with stages that we want to achieve. The Sultanate’s long-term strategy was adopted
 in order to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 a modern state, with a special emphasis on the improvement and protection of Omani heritage and public culture. 