Search
Tools
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

PARACHUTE PICTURE & WORKING

PARACHUTE PICTURE & WORKING oV7dK

THIS PICTURE SHOWS THE PARACHUTE WHICH HAS A BASKET AND COOL AIR MAKES THE BASKET HEAVY FROM THE BOTTOM. A BURNER WITH A PROPANE CYLINDER MIX PROPANE WITH THE AIR TO PRODUCES FLAME TO MAKE HOT AIR WHICH MAKES THE PARACHUTE LIGHTER AND IT FLOATS IN THE AIR. THE BASKET IS CONNECTED TO ROPE FROM BOTH THE ENDS FOR A SUPPORT AND THEN CONNECTED WITH THE SKIRT. A BIG BALLOON-LIKE SHAPE IS KNOWN AS AN ENVELOPE THAT CONSISTS OF DIFFERENT GORES AND GORES IS SECTIONED WITH THE NUMBER OF PANELS. ON THE TOP A SEALING FLAP IS THERE WHICH ALLOWS HOT AIR TO ESCAPE AT A CONTROLLED RATE AND IS KNOWN AS A PARACHUTE VALVE. THE RIDE OF THE PARACHUTE IS VERY LIGHT IT FLOATS ABOVE THE SKY AND IS A WONDERFUL EXPERIENCE. ONE SHOULD DEFINITELY TRY THE PARACHUTE RIDE TO FEEL A UNFORGETTABLE JOURNEY WITH A LIFETIME EXPERIENCE.

THIS PICTURE This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
SHOWS
 THE PARACHUTE WHICH HAS A BASKET AND COOL You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbreathbreezewind
AIR
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
MAKES
 THE BASKET HEAVY FROM THE BOTTOM. A BURNER WITH A PROPANE CYLINDER MIX PROPANE WITH THE You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbreathbreezewind
AIR
 TO PRODUCES FLAME TO This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
MAKE
 HOT You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbreathbreezewind
AIR
 WHICH This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
MAKES
 THE PARACHUTE LIGHTER AND IT FLOATS IN THE You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbreathbreezewind
AIR
. THE BASKET IS CONNECTED
 TO ROPE FROM BOTH THE ENDS FOR A SUPPORT AND THEN CONNECTED WITH THE SKIRT. A This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
BIG
 BALLOON-LIKE SHAPE IS KNOWN
 AS AN ENVELOPE THAT CONSISTS OF This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
DIFFERENT
 GORES AND GORES IS SECTIONED
 WITH THE NUMBER OF PANELS. ON THE TOP A SEALING FLAP IS THERE WHICH This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorizes
ALLOWS
 HOT You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbreathbreezewind
AIR
 TO ESCAPE AT A CONTROLLED RATE AND IS KNOWN
 AS A PARACHUTE VALVE.

THE RIDE OF THE PARACHUTE IS This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
VERY
 LIGHT IT FLOATS ABOVE THE SKY AND IS A WONDERFUL EXPERIENCE. ONE SHOULD DEFINITELY TRY THE PARACHUTE RIDE TO FEEL A UNFORGETTABLE JOURNEY WITH A LIFETIME EXPERIENCE. 