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INTERNET SHOPPING IS A BOOM

INTERNET SHOPPING IS A BOOM Prp0X
E-MARKETING IS TRENDING AND HAS BEEN FOLLOWED BY ALMOST 80% THESE DAYS, IT IS REALLY GOOD OPTION FOR THE WORKING PEOPLE WHO ARE VERY BUS IN THIS LIFE AND IS NOT ABLE TO MANAGE GOING MARKETS PHYSICALLY AND SELECT THINGS, INSTEAD THIS HELPS HOUSEWIVES WHO CANNOT GO FAR AWAY FOR SHOPPING BUT CAN PLACE ORDER FROM HOME, THEY CAN ORDER GROCERIES, TOYS, ARTICLES, CLOTHES, EVERYTHING. INTERNET HAS GIVEN A LIFE TO PHYSICALLY CHALLENGED PEOPLE ALSO, THEY CAN ALSO FREELY ORDER ANYTHING AT ANY TIME WITHOUT ANY HUSTLE. IT HAS HELPED MANY PEOPLE IN MANY WAYS, THIS DISTANCE SHOPPING SAVES TIMES, MONEY AND ENERGY. THEY GAVE VARIOUS DISCOUNT AND CASHBACK OPTIONS TO PEOPLE. NO, I DON'T THINK SO THAT THE ADVANTAGES OF SHOPPING IN THIS WAY OUTWEIGH THE DISADVANTAGES. PEOPLE CAN SIT AND EXPLORE THE INFINITE NUMBER OF THINGS IN A GO AND CAN ORDER AT ANY LOCATION FAR OR NEAR, CAN SURPRISE THEIR LOVED ONE BY GIFTING THEM THEIR FAVOURITE APPARELS ETC. THIS IS AN MODERN ERA AND TO DEVELOP ONE'S NATION THE COMMUNITY SHOULD OPT FOR THE BEST AND NEW THINGS TO FULFILL THEIR DEMANDS BY MANAGING TIME AND FOCUSSING ON THE BEST. THIS WILL LED TO EASY AND MANAGED LIVING WITH NO PAIN ONLY GAIN. IN FACT NOW PEOPLE WITH THEIR SHOPS AND PROPER CHANNELS HAVE AN OPTION TO JOIN E MARKET TO GROW.
E-MARKETING IS TRENDING AND HAS
BEEN FOLLOWED
BY ALMOST 80% THESE DAYS, IT IS
REALLY
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GOOD
OPTION FOR THE WORKING
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PEOPLE
WHO ARE
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VERY
BUS IN THIS LIFE AND IS NOT ABLE TO MANAGE GOING MARKETS
PHYSICALLY
AND SELECT THINGS,
INSTEAD
THIS
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HELPS
HOUSEWIVES WHO CANNOT GO FAR AWAY FOR SHOPPING
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BUT
CAN PLACE
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ORDER
FROM HOME, THEY CAN
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ORDER
GROCERIES, TOYS, ARTICLES, CLOTHES, EVERYTHING.

INTERNET HAS
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GIVEN
A LIFE TO
PHYSICALLY
CHALLENGED
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PEOPLE
ALSO
, THEY CAN
ALSO
FREELY
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ORDER
ANYTHING AT ANY TIME WITHOUT ANY HUSTLE. IT HAS
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HELPED
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MANY
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PEOPLE
IN
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MANY
WAYS, THIS DISTANCE SHOPPING SAVES TIMES, MONEY AND ENERGY. THEY GAVE VARIOUS DISCOUNT AND CASHBACK OPTIONS TO
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PEOPLE
.

NO, I DON'T
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THINK
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SO
THAT THE ADVANTAGES OF SHOPPING IN THIS WAY OUTWEIGH THE DISADVANTAGES.
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PEOPLE
CAN SIT AND EXPLORE THE INFINITE NUMBER OF THINGS IN A GO AND CAN
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ORDER
AT ANY LOCATION FAR OR NEAR, CAN SURPRISE THEIR
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LOVED
ONE BY GIFTING THEM THEIR
Possible spelling mistake. 'FAVOURITE' is British English.
FAVOURITE
APPARELS ETC. THIS IS AN MODERN ERA AND TO DEVELOP ONE'S NATION THE COMMUNITY SHOULD OPT FOR THE BEST AND NEW THINGS TO FULFILL THEIR DEMANDS BY MANAGING TIME AND FOCUSSING ON THE BEST. THIS WILL LED TO EASY AND MANAGED LIVING WITH NO PAIN
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ONLY
GAIN.

IN FACT
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NOW
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PEOPLE
WITH THEIR SHOPS AND PROPER CHANNELS HAVE AN OPTION TO
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JOIN
E MARKET TO GROW.

IELTS essay INTERNET SHOPPING IS A BOOM

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
226 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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