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WAVE ENERGY MACHINE FOR ELECTRICITY GENERATION

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WAVE ENERGY IS A RENEWABLE ENERGY THAT IS NOW BEING USED AS A DISTRIBUTED ENERGY RESOURCE. IT IS USED FOR ENERGY GENERATION BY INSTALLING IT IN TWO LOCATIONS ONE LOCATION FOR SMALL WAVES FOR LOW INPUT AND THE INSTALLATION COST IS ALSO LOW AND OTHER LARGE WAVES FOR HIGH INPUT INSTALLATION COST IS HIGH. WORKING OF THE WAVE ENERGY MACHINE IS LIKE WAVE DIRECTION INCREASES THE WATER LEVELS IN THE MACHINE WITH THE AIRFLOW THE TURBINE STARTS TO MOVE AND GENERATE ELECTRICITY BY ELECTRICITY GENERATOR. WITH THE INCREASED SPEED OF THE TURBINE MORE ELECTRICITY WILL GENERATE. IT'S A FREE RESOURCE AND WE SHOULD UTILISE IT PROPERLY, ENERGY IS VERY EXPENSIVE AND WITH THE INSTALLATION OF THE WAVE TRAPPER IF WE CAN PRODUCE THE NEW FORM OF ENERGY IT IS A GREAT AND FRUITFUL WORK OF SCIENCE. I AM HAPPY WITH THE WORK OUR SCIENTIST IS DOING.
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ENERGY
IS A RENEWABLE
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ENERGY
THAT IS
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NOW
BEING
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USED
AS A DISTRIBUTED
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ENERGY
RESOURCE.

IT IS
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USED
FOR
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ENERGY
GENERATION BY INSTALLING IT IN TWO LOCATIONS ONE LOCATION FOR
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SMALL
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WAVES
FOR LOW INPUT AND THE INSTALLATION COST IS
ALSO
LOW AND OTHER LARGE
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WAVES
FOR HIGH INPUT INSTALLATION COST IS HIGH.

WORKING OF THE
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WAVE
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ENERGY
MACHINE IS LIKE
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WAVE
DIRECTION INCREASES THE WATER LEVELS IN THE MACHINE WITH THE AIRFLOW THE TURBINE
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STARTS
TO
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MOVE
AND GENERATE ELECTRICITY BY ELECTRICITY GENERATOR. WITH THE INCREASED SPEED OF THE TURBINE MORE ELECTRICITY WILL GENERATE. IT'S A FREE RESOURCE AND WE SHOULD
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UTILISE
IT
PROPERLY
,
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ENERGY
IS
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VERY
EXPENSIVE AND WITH THE INSTALLATION OF THE
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WAVE
TRAPPER IF WE CAN PRODUCE THE NEW FORM OF
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ENERGY
IT IS A GREAT AND FRUITFUL WORK OF SCIENCE. I AM HAPPY WITH THE WORK OUR SCIENTIST IS DOING.
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IELTS essay WAVE ENERGY MACHINE FOR ELECTRICITY GENERATION

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  American English
3 paragraphs
146 words
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